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An avatar for pixel joint. (Updated with a second) !!
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Godslayer
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An avatar for pixel joint. (Updated with a second) !!
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August 21, 2005, 02:21:37 am
Well, dish out the pointers! I haven't much to say, besides I really want to improve.
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ehwhy
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Re: An avatar for pixel joint.
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August 21, 2005, 07:19:20 pm
Here's a quick edit of the face:
What I did:
Desaturated the skin.
Removed the dithering because it was making the face crowded and blurry.
Changed the shading and the lips.
I hope this helps!
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Godslayer
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Re: An avatar for pixel joint.
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August 21, 2005, 07:31:58 pm
Sweet! Besides looking a bit to much for a monkey for my tastes (wich doesnt matter- it was quick) that seems to be an improvement. I guess I'm hesitant to use skin tones like that because I make the face seem empty.
But on my next piece I'll take this into account.
Thanks!
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Godslayer
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Re: An avatar for pixel joint. (Updated with a second) !!
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August 21, 2005, 10:55:02 pm
Heres another one, using some of your crits:
A gift for a freind by the name of Dementedhero.
-EDIT-
Fixed the nose and forehead:
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Re: An avatar for pixel joint. (Updated with a second) !!
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August 22, 2005, 01:18:33 am
I like them, the second one more than the first, and after the edit, I don't really have any crits. Good job overall
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