His legs look way too short and/or his arms too long. I'd like to see what can be distinquished as his upper body thickened and his legs lengthened. Probably have his arms shortened a bit, even if you lengthen the legs. Also something to give more form to the silhouette woud be good, since it's really strange not being able to figure out the proportions.

I also don't like that his legs are so trunk like. I'm a fan of thinner limbs, I guess. Then there's the flail itself, the handle aaed to the black is hardly noticable. The aa color is just way too dark. Personally, I would've used the red shade which you used to aa the handle to the background and would've just left the part of the handle overlapping the background without aa. I think the spiked ball is really over aaed too where it meets the light gray floor, it just makes it look too blurry and BrotherInWar's edit makes it look too bulky and outlined, not really fixing the blurriness problem. Although my edit may make the spikes look too needlelike, but you could just thicken them up with the darker mid gray at the base of each spike, until the black meets said gray in the background, then you could just use the black at the base to thicken it.

Here's how I would've done it:


Sorry if somethings aren't very clear, I'm tired and horrible at explanations.

When I was younger, we had to draw with mice. Real mice. You'd have to squish their heads until they imploded and the blood was your ink. People soon moved onto larger animals, since the mice population was going down with it having to take at least three hundred of them for an intricate 9" x 12" piece. We don't talk about what came of the Dodo bird after that though.

N, the ninja game, is freeware and is one of the best lode-runner type games out there.

<3 N. It's so fun once you start getting good at it. It's one of those games where you end up wanting to tell someone the whole scenario about how you moved to shake off the missiles and dodge the lasers at the same time. Like one of those obsessed CS or Halo kids, if you know any of them in real life. "So I had the needler and he had the fuel rod..." sort of thing.

I cannot beileve 13 people voted for Alex.

I can't believe they let Alex on the ballot in the first place XD

Wow, sorry if I sound like an ass when I say this because I'm really not trying to be, but I'm surprised that I got the most votes. I had put three votes on Dogmeat and one towards myself and if I hadn't done that then he would've been ahead. One vote really does make a difference I guess.

I wish I had kept stuff from around that time. I think the earliest things I have saved in my small archive folder is a zombie Pegwo made and a KOF picture of Jibuu, probably from Ndeal. I don't remember what time the Jibuu picture was made, but the look of it makes me think of earlier Ndeal. I don't have anything from you though, Sawtooth. Besides the zombie walk (now).

I really should save more stuff. I never really thought much of saving stuff back then though.