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Pixel Art / Re: Does this look done?
« on: September 27, 2010, 12:32:34 am »
no.

[edit by jad: I was going to remove this, but as this post has been replied to, I'll let it stay. People, don't post one-worders like this. Give real feedback, in every post if possible. It's what we strive for here at the pix. Thank you!]

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Pixel Art / Re: Average Guy
« on: September 21, 2010, 04:36:35 am »
Fist things i notice are:

The character's stance seems a bit odd, looks like he's pushing his pelvis out and arching his back. Like he put his hands on his hips an is doing hip thrusts.
The heart on his t-shit isnt in the same perspective as the shirt.

The girls hips seem very wide, or is she wearing a skirt over some leggings? i cant really tell. Also she looks like she is one pixel away from giving me the finger, which, if she is trying to do, then you're one pixel short.

I'm working on uploading my quick edit.

Edit: Got it!:

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Pixel Art / Re: Cool-colored Health Bar
« on: August 30, 2010, 04:54:51 am »
I saw this image and am working on a project that needs a 4 part measuring meter for an RPG, and really like your layout. I hope you don't mind, i'm not stealing it, i just like the idea you have with the orb and the bars coming off from it. In the edit from the mockup it looks like you extended that middle bar which helps make it more prominent. perhaps seeing it full, half full, and empty will help, with critiques, I'm assuming that it wont always stay full.

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