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Pixel Art / Re: Minotaur - seeks advice
« on: March 11, 2021, 07:55:55 am »
Hello again.

I changed a bit using all of your advice. Thank you cels as well!

What about now?


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Pixel Art / Re: Minotaur - seeks advice
« on: March 08, 2021, 10:34:43 am »
Hello there.

Thank You eliddell and eishiya.

Iīm sorry I am late to upload as well. Got a bit busy over weekend. I will study your example and see where to do changes.
And I didnīt mean to make you feel stressed sorry about that. Migraines are tough.

I am happy you take the time!

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Pixel Art / Re: Minotaur - seeks advice
« on: March 04, 2021, 07:16:27 pm »
Thank you for your reply.

I will experiment a bit on the points you gave.
The arm should be longer yes, and the left hoof a bit longer too.

I think I liked how sort of goofy he looked, in that it is a monster of combining man with bull as in the original story. Sort of like an abomination, or unsettling. So I will try some steps first, and then look at it with changes to teeth and horns or not.
It does look a bit glued on though :P, I will try to change it a bit. I want to differ it from the minotaur lord, which is also from oblivion, which has horn that go straight up

For the pectorals.. would it make more sense to change the shadows and lights, or move them tighter together?
I will try to change the shadows on the left arm a bit, remove the weird part.

you're shadowing the creases between the muscles more darkly than the bits that actually have shadow cast across them.

This is a common critique for me. Should the creases go a tint lighter? The arms are sort of divided into three parts, and the pectoral together with shoulders the same. as well as under the pecs.

Thank you again for taking the time!

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Need Help To Improve This River Animation
« on: March 04, 2021, 01:00:16 pm »
This might help

https://twitter.com/saint11/status/798222972326526976

Basically have effects on top, but make water underneath flow smoothly.
I also am not sure you need the sides to move, looks like dirt is moving instead of the water.

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Pixel Art / Minotaur - seeks advice
« on: March 04, 2021, 12:33:15 pm »
Hello again.

I am sorry if I ask. I really find the advice helps.

This here is a minotaur.  I wonder if it reads well? If not, where should it change?
I also am a bit confused about the arms specifically. Do they look strange?



Thank you always for advice!

Ps. I based it on this one
https://images.uesp.net/e/ef/OB-creature-Minotaur.jpg





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Pixel Art / Re: Sload big monster - where can this improve?
« on: March 04, 2021, 12:25:06 pm »
Thank you cels.

I will take this into account.. gonna upload another, perhaps more familiar creature to see advice here : D

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Pixel Art / Re: Wereboar - any advice on fur?
« on: January 15, 2021, 11:32:40 am »
Alright. Yea I see what you mean.
I really like heavy shadows, like in Darkest Dungeon, but perhaps I overdid it. I think I wanted it to look like the hair was like a big tuft that hanged over a bit, so that it created a shadow . I did a wolf as well and I think it has the same problem, not sure if its against the forum rules to upload it here though.

I appreciate your advice and example :)  Maybe I should study a bit of anatomy before I do pixel art hehe

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Pixel Art / Re: Wereboar - any advice on fur?
« on: January 14, 2021, 08:33:02 am »
Hi again.

Did some slight modifications. does this look any better?



Changed hand, the shadow under the shoulder, the hooves,

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Pixel Art / Re: [C+C] Female 64 x 64 Portraits
« on: January 13, 2021, 10:19:39 pm »
You have improved a lot! I really like them!

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Pixel Art / Re: Wereboar - any advice on fur?
« on: January 13, 2021, 10:18:39 pm »
Thank you. That is indeed good points.

I will try to check those parts out a bit more. When you say left, do you mean from our perspective or the pigs actual left?

Really appreciate you taking the time. I was indeed mostly confused about the arms and chest. Perhaps its better to just darken the chest spot... I think the arm closer to us look ok but the other the hand might be turned a bit strange

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