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Pixel Art / Re: D~Dawg's pixels
« on: August 08, 2009, 07:37:15 pm »
You're saying I shouldn't dither right now? Alright, whatever.
I'll bring out the shading WAY more, and take away the dithering. Thanks alot. ;)
And I was thinking about putting the shade up just a little below his mouth. Too much, or what?

PS: love your avatar! ;D

Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Zlerk(Made Up character)
« on: August 08, 2009, 03:56:09 pm »
The horn just looks weird...:huh: I think it's a little to skinny, and too pointy.

The 2 oldest ones look like pears. :lol:

Lastly, you brought back the outline.

Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Slime
« on: August 08, 2009, 03:47:42 pm »
ahhh oh no he's trapped!
It's good practice to have ample room for your animations so you don't get any awkward boxed-in effects.

2 or 3 pixels away from the border makes it look much better. ;D

By the way, you need to remove the outline. Outlines really don't need to be in pixel art, unless it's a cartoony type of style. ;)

Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] FLAG
« on: August 08, 2009, 03:40:13 pm »
At the moment it looks like the light is coming from behind-lower-left of the image, but the flag looks otherwise. :)

And now that I've stared at it some more, it looks like the shading is just a hole in the pole. :lol: (that ryhmed)

Pixel Art / Re: [WIP]My Avatar HELP! please
« on: August 08, 2009, 03:36:33 pm »
I think your problem is just the utter blackness.
Lighten it up a little, like politopo's edit.
You also need to make some reflections in the water

Pixel Art / Re: D~Dawg's pixels
« on: August 08, 2009, 03:31:21 pm »
Would it be absolutely okay to change this thread to just Ribbs?

Update for Ribbs:

To dither...Or not to dither? That is the question.

Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Zlerk(Made Up character)
« on: August 07, 2009, 09:37:13 pm »
Here's what it would look like without outlines.

If you don't like that, you could just AA it.

Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Zlerk(Made Up character)
« on: August 07, 2009, 09:09:18 pm »
Cool creature! I think when people make up their own stuff and turn it into pixel art, that's awesome.

As far as the art goes:
The only mistake I see is the outline. Either put in some AA, or get rid of it all together.
Good luck, and I hope this goes far! :y:

Pixel Art / Re: D~Dawg's pixels
« on: August 07, 2009, 09:01:46 pm »
Well, that's great, but...This looks nothing like my character. (no offense)
Thanks anyway, though.

And I'll try to learn from what your doing. ;)

Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] FLAG
« on: August 07, 2009, 03:40:10 pm »
plus cloth isn't very reflective as Atnas said.

I said that, too.  :D

Yeah, your not doing much work on the pole. Forget about the flag for a while, and work on the pole. It needs to be more shiny.

And notice how your shading goes to the left.

Your ligthing needs to be torward the right.

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