Just a robot thing:


It's supposed to be a robot's head. The orange-red part is his eye, the bump in the middle is his nose, and he's not really supposed to have a mouth, but it looks like he does.

Whattaya' think?

Yes, that's what I thought "hue" meant but I wasn't sure...
How's this?

EPIC, huh?




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I haven't removed the black outlines

I work on that later, I just now redid him.

is this what you meant?

Also, i recommend changing more the hue between the shades, and making them more variant on the light source.

Could you give me an example of what you mean, please?

That's really something, CeeY.

2 problems I see:
hat
background

1: The hat's red parts should definetly be blinded in more. And it really looks like cardboard, just like Mush said. Maybe someone else can tell you how to fix that. (cuz I don't know)

2: The background is too dark. I hate when people make dark backgrounds.
Let the sun shine in, and the peice will look better.

I don't think you've listened to peoples' advice on the hat too much. His head looks fine. His hat...CARDBOARD.

Until you decide to fix it, I'm calling you 'Cardboard Man'.

AA the strings. That's the only thing I see wrong.