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Pixel Art / Re: Some steampunk things.
« on: August 17, 2009, 01:33:38 am »
I dont want to be nitpicking but how is this steampunk related?

And I don't want to be nitpicking, but who cares? And who cares about how engines work? We all learned that in school. Just make a muffler and smoke coming out of it is the simple solution. And you usaully don't wanna pay much attention to anything non-pixel art related that they say.

My pointers:
I say do more work on the gaint legs. Your doing pretty good with the small stuff details, but the legs are...lacking.
I'd go with the 2nd palette, or the last one. Just really brings it out.

Good Luck

Pixel Art / Re: Tile set - Cliffs, grass
« on: August 17, 2009, 01:25:45 am »
You should definetly change the color of the grass on the cliff to a different color on the ground. Or the other way around. Maybe you should just but dirt on the cliff.

PS: I hope I get as good as you one day.

Pixel Art / Re: [WIP]Boo-Boo~~from YOGI BEAR!!
« on: August 17, 2009, 01:22:07 am »
And how is talking about banding of the thick lines off-topic? It's a mistake that needs to be fixed.

True. :-\ But besides, I think she was working on fixing the thickness below the left ear.
Another thing would be to fix the tie. The left side of it is nice and smooth, but the right is all jagged.
((And which of you mods deleted that post of mine? :mean:))

Pixel Art / Re: [WIP]Boo-Boo~~from YOGI BEAR!!
« on: August 14, 2009, 07:24:59 pm »
i still gotta clean em up around the edges and shade him.

Did any of you guys by any chance read that? (gez, you guys are so off topic. :mean: )

Anyways, "ontopicism":
I noticed the belly...When it comes down to his leg, it's just straight. Round that out.
And did he break his leg? (the one closest to us) I think it's pretty clear what I'm talking about. ;)

Pixel Art Feature Chest / Re: [WIP] The Yeti project
« on: August 13, 2009, 11:45:11 pm »
So...Are you done or what?

Actual Critique:
The shadow under the chin --however-- brings out that he has a neck. :-\

Pixel Art / Re: [WIP]Boo-Boo~~from YOGI BEAR!!
« on: August 13, 2009, 11:21:30 pm »
You shouldn't have posted him yet if he isn't even shaded.
The only thing I can critique is his fingers. All the rest of him is thick outlined, but the fingers are skinny.


Pixel Art / Re: Odd-eyed Critter
« on: August 13, 2009, 05:52:43 pm »
I don't really see anything wrong...

Just 2 things:
The tongue looks like you didn't do alot of work on it.
And the yellow on the belly looks weird... (get it? YELLOW on the BELLY...Yellow Belly)

Pixel Art / Re: D~Dawg's pixels
« on: August 13, 2009, 01:14:16 pm »
Your frog, no offense :) looks like he is absorbing light most of the way through his body, somehow.

:lol: that was funny. And, yeah, someone else said to make it black and white before, right? I really thought that helped when I did it last time. Oh, and you put 3 ":)" smileys in that post...

The robot is gone now. No mo' robo. Robot's outta here! No more robot.

Here's a little thing I did with Ribbs ;) (sorry for bad quality)

And swords update: changed the old one and made a new one. :D

The new one kinda looks like a cow utter... :P

Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Evil Slipper Kid
« on: August 13, 2009, 01:09:29 pm »
Im going to shade them like the legs.
That'd be a good idea.

And it all looks flat. You need to shade more, or change the outlines.

Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Evil Slipper Kid
« on: August 13, 2009, 02:10:28 am »
Decrease the width and take off the squigly lines on the arms. ;)

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