Damn yeah that was an incredible fix. Feels much better with this now.

So thankful for all of the wonderful critique thus far! Here's what I've got now =]



let me know what you think!

More progress! Getting back on this thing. It's been over a year since I've posted to PJ >.<

Yeah I agree. Should make it easier for me too =]

Woah! I cannot say enough thanks to all of the incredible comments and critique thank you all so much, it really means a lot to me 

I really loved just about everything everyone said so I tried to combine them all into what I have now. Now I'm curious about perspective and what I can add visually to the new shore area I just added.



Also, a little bit of inspiration for the piece to those who are interested:

The title is actually the name of the first place I lived. I was born in a hospital in Monterrey, California. As a youth I moved quite frequently, 9 times before high school to be exact. Of all the places I've lived, Pacific Grove always had a unique freedom about it. The coolest thing about it to me was that the population, aside from being more elderly, was very adventurous. The shores of the Monterrey bay area have quite a few little divots and somewhat hidden beaches. With this scene I want to be able to depict this free and adventurous, yet mysterious characteristic that the land in this part of California has, and the treasures of nature you can find by parking on the side of a road and walking towards the water.