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Pixel Art / Re: Lizard/Dinosaur thing
« on: December 31, 2008, 05:44:27 pm »
Yeah, neck could be a little longer. Either that or lower the position of the arm. Also, the tail looks too thin, at least where it connects to the rest of its body. Muscle structure in the arms looks good though! :3

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Pixel Art / Re: Me!
« on: December 31, 2008, 08:00:27 am »
Small update:



Tried to smooth out that square-ish highlight on the face, and took out a hair color.

I feel awkward using MS paint for this stuff, can anyone suggest any other programs that aren't super complicated? I'm just tired of not having a transparent background. :P

edit: Fixed some things, got rid of two colors.


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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP]KINGS THE GAME
« on: December 31, 2008, 06:45:27 am »
Much better. The font on some of the stuff is a little hard to make out.. Like, it took me a while to figure out that said "Csar" in the upper left. Not a huge deal though.

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Pixel Art / Re: Mermaid [WIP]
« on: December 29, 2008, 01:49:21 pm »
I feel that the negative space on the right side needs something.. The mermaid isn't (no offense) interesting enough to catch my eye, and it has nowhere else to drift to.

I say, either crop the image and/or bring out the mermaid (make her bigger, more vivid, just generally more interesting to look at), or add a secondary element to the picture.

I second that! Why not show the sun as it's setting?

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Pixel Art / Re: First Try Walk Anim WIP
« on: December 29, 2008, 06:02:52 am »
Hmm.. Besides the right arm, the fact that the area from the waist to the chest doesn't seem to move much (or at all) bothers me. A little bit of rotation would go a long way.

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Pixel Art / Me!
« on: December 29, 2008, 01:57:35 am »
I'm currently working on several art projects for my studio art class, one of which is a large pixelated version of myself. I'll be hand painting each pixel (at 1x1 cm each). But before I paint, I figured I'd come here for critique on mah pixels. :3



:P If you couldn't tell, I'm a bit of a novice. I tried to reduce the color count, but I'm not sure how to do so without the nose completely disappearing.



(oh yeah, I should probably also mention I'm going for a more cel-shaded style.)
Edit: er, images appear not to be working. :0
Edit2: Thanks, images are working now. :3

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Pixel Art / Re: Hide and Seek [WIP]
« on: December 28, 2008, 05:02:17 am »
Maybe it's just me, but I think the darker version might be a bit TOO dark. I'd say bring out the highlights more.

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Pixel Art / Re: Monster House
« on: December 24, 2008, 10:28:45 pm »
I'm not really sure what that pillar is all about.. Is it wood or rock?

Er, also, correct me if I'm wrong, but it looks like that says "momster" instead of "monster".. x3

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Pixel Art / Re: Fetus Christmas Card
« on: December 16, 2008, 11:45:00 am »
Ack, no, post it at 1x. You can zoom into things here by clicking on 'em.

Oh wow, I didn't know that. xD I suppose it's pretty obvious that I'm new here.

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Pixel Art / Re: Fetus Christmas Card
« on: December 16, 2008, 04:19:16 am »
Well, if you're not intending it to be seen at 1x, I'd suggest maybe posting it a bit bigger.. That aside, I don't see anything wrong, per se. Though, due to the apostrophe in "I'll", the lack of one in "dont" kinda bugs me.

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