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Pixel Art / Re: Clouds and purple
« on: March 30, 2021, 01:46:26 am »
I agree in general terms with what fskn says about the lighting: the lantern should be throwing more light on the objects closest to it (it needs to be brighter than the moonlight for there to be any point in carrying it). Not sure I would make the light on the tree as strong as it is in the paintover, though. 
The figure's eyes strike me as too dark, like they should be picking up some reflected light from the lantern and aren't, maybe? Right now, they almost look like empty sockets. Or is the figure supposed to be wearing a mask?
The ground in the middle of the picture is difficult to interpret. Looks almost like a mass of cloud or treetops with a rock hovering in the middle, where that one bit has more contrast.
I'm also not sure that having the faces of some of the taller background buildings exactly the same colour as the sky quite works. Run a bead of highlight partway down from the roof right where the corner should be, maybe?

The figure's eyes strike me as too dark, like they should be picking up some reflected light from the lantern and aren't, maybe? Right now, they almost look like empty sockets. Or is the figure supposed to be wearing a mask?
The ground in the middle of the picture is difficult to interpret. Looks almost like a mass of cloud or treetops with a rock hovering in the middle, where that one bit has more contrast.
I'm also not sure that having the faces of some of the taller background buildings exactly the same colour as the sky quite works. Run a bead of highlight partway down from the roof right where the corner should be, maybe?