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Pixel Art / Re: Help with... Proportions I guess? (Critique/Feedback)
« on: December 11, 2017, 12:11:05 am »
Does "better" means "Is better but still too improvable" or "You nailed it, it's perfect as it is"? .___. sorry if i'm sounding too desperate but i'm obsesed with perfection :P This crap must be ERRORLESS!!! >:(

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Pixel Art / Re: beat em' up character ANIMATED (Critique and feedback here)
« on: December 10, 2017, 04:03:47 am »
Random Reply to not let the topic die XD

before I continue animating, I want to design the other characters, check this topic for more info https://pixelation.org/index.php?topic=24204.0

I'll update as soon as i'm happy with the game's artstyle

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Pixel Art / Re: Help with... Proportions I guess? (Critique/Feedback)
« on: December 10, 2017, 04:02:09 am »
*Changed the Girl's hair (not that th other hair will go unused, actually the fact that she seems androgine is an advantage because I can make a male character with that body without anyone noticing XD)

*The Jock arms were enteirley redrawn, I will follow a more cartoony style, the design of the shirt was changed (the design was actually a sleeveless rugby shirt, but I think it doesnīt translate very well in pixel art

*Added another character



Does them look beter or worse? ._.

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Pixel Art / Re: Help with... Proportions I guess? (Critique/Feedback)
« on: December 09, 2017, 07:51:22 pm »
Hmmm... I think I kind of get it...

It is supposed to be an idle pose but I canīt find the right position for them. Are the length and width of the arms alright?

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Pixel Art / Help with... Proportions I guess? (Critique/Feedback)
« on: December 08, 2017, 09:20:54 pm »
Topic related to this one:

https://pixelation.org/index.php?topic=24158.0

Need feedback with the following characters:



*The first one is the same as in the link above but with hair
*The second one is like the "female version", i'm not very familiar with female figure so I need feedback on this one before continuing
*The third... well, I know it sucks... but I donīt know why... like maybe the proportions are wrong or simply the arms are poorly drawn... this is the one I need the most help with

Once again, if you donīt have a lot to say then a simple "It's ok", "I donīt quite like it" or something like that is going to be very helpful :) THANKS

EDIT: It looks like the link for the image expired, so this is the latest version of the piece XD

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Pixel Art / Re: beat em' up character ANIMATED (Critique and feedback here)
« on: December 06, 2017, 04:40:25 am »
I'm Actually with another project so i don't want to begin development until finishing with that one, is very common for indies to fail due to work on a lot of projects at the same time, it begins with 2 simultaneous projects, then it becomes 3, then 6, you canīt stop overwhelming yourself, is like a drug XD. I want to avoid that at all costs, so one project at time and everyone happy

I'm, however, too inspired in working with this beat em up and i canīt help myself but to do this animations in my free time, just to calm my instincts XD.

[READ FROM HERE FOR WHAT'S IMPORTANT]

Enough with that, maybe i'll make a dummy unity to test the animations, what I want to say with this is that for the moment my focus is that "the sprites looks allright", i'll test animation coherency at due time (still, those animation tips were fantastic and i'm stil recieving comentaries on that)

Other thing (first of all, i'm OBVIOUSLY a godamn noob in game dev, I'm at my first year of college XD) I want this game to look nice THEREFORE working the gameplay around the design, if i'm commiting a mistake doing this (specially if it is project breaking-huge) I want to know ._____. donīt let me destroy myself with my crappy ideas XD

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Pixel Art / Re: beat em' up character ANIMATED (Critique and feedback here)
« on: December 04, 2017, 06:22:13 pm »
Wow, that certainly looks way better O.o thank youuuu :D



What is the next step? (god, i'm inspired right now XD)

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Pixel Art / Re: beat em' up character ANIMATED (Critique and feedback here)
« on: December 04, 2017, 05:35:16 am »
I donīt quite get the "horizontal movement" thing, what I understood of that is that the body pushes itself a little forward when the foot leaves the ground... is that what you meant? .____. I also designed two versions

Subtle (1px forward in key frames):


Strong (2px forward in keyframes):


Anyway, THANKS a lot for everything :)

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Pixel Art / Re: beat em' up character ANIMATED (Critique and feedback here)
« on: December 04, 2017, 02:00:20 am »
Thanks a lot for the answer :D

Do you think the animation needs more frames or simply more "asymmetrical" timing?

I got this:


Does it look better?

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Pixel Art / beat em' up character ANIMATED (Critique and feedback here)
« on: December 03, 2017, 06:29:25 am »
First of all, i'm not really sure if it is ok to start a new thread for something related to another piece, so if i shouldn't do this then sorry and please let me know :blind:

Anyway, whadabout this?


Does it look good? ok? even if you don't know what to say or can't precisely put your finger on what's wrong (if so), hearing a "good job" or "I donīt quite like it" will be fantastically helpful :) THANKS A LOT for the other feedback, this forum is fantastic :D

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