Close! Try adding the "edges" of his lips to the outer edge of the cheek balls, and try giving that tail more of a wiggle to it than just a rotation. You're trying to make it look less stiff, aye?


...and on that thought, perhaps some more of a full-body inflation before the thing pops out so it feels more uh... trackable? I'm losing the word I want here so hopefully that one gets the idea across. It's a followthrough thing, the turret kinda pops out after a moment with a lot of movementless space inbetween that makes it hard to connect the breath-holding with the pop.

Momentary edit, I have no idea what to do with the tail, the problem i'm facing is that if I animate the tail a lot then i have to do it in the rest of the animations and i'm going to finish the sprite sheet of this guy like in 3018, Happy new year btw

two things, I didnīt get quite right the lips part and JellyStarCat edit is glorious lml so I implemented it (on my style, of course)

Is the monster of before, i'm resuming my run n gun game (which I put on hold during because of college) and made an animation on how the "sprout" on his back

During upload I noticed like 98413023419082314 pixels off and quirks that I'm planning to repair later, at the moment is the movement and aesthetic of the animation what i want feedback on (point out the errors if you want anyway in case I missed something)

In like one month I want to post a gameplay of stage one for further feedback (I hope ._.) Hope you like it

I think i'm happy with this one, REALLY THANK YOU GUYS
I know is far from perfect but I canīt stick to just one animation, I have to move on with the rest, if the mistakes are too obvious or ruins the piece entirely and I should REALLY change it, please make me know (I donīt want to embarrass myself )

Honestly this isn't a style that works without mouths on, they look kinda gremliny. Add mouths, try to make that work with the style.
you can do a lot for personality with that, play around with options.

Whaddabou this?



"Concept Art" Sprites to test... ummm... personality? well... it was my idea all the time that the characters had mouthes but only that shows when necessary, anyway I added it and loks better, I will make more "concepts" on the other characters

Ok here it is this time for real

WIP of the hair, I want to know if movement is alright before detailing