nicely done with the colors. she really stands out, but it seems that you have put all your energy on the upper body and just skimmed through the lower part.



1. One is described as what i see as her splinemovment in that pose. i get the feeling that shes kinda pouting her ass out.
2. But if we look at number two, her lower part of the torso and her leg makes for almost a completley straight line making the one pose impossible.
3. And as for number three you can put that box ontop of the thigh (spelling?) and it fits making them too thin.

Im sorry if i sound too harsh, i really think this will be a great pice if the anatomy is corrected.

Quick edit to show how he could pop although his arms melt in with the background

Woooh! Let's make Pixelbabies OAAN.

First get rid of the white background. it eats all the colors.
Second, everything has shape except the pants. use some shading to make them pop.
Third, call me when you are ready! 

Thank You Kamirose that helped with the jaggies.

Yes there are two lightsources as you mentioned, however on second thought thinking game related it will probably be standing outdoors with only the sun as a lightsource, so i will remove the lighter of the two shadows.

My second atempt.

There is a company called Playdo that does a game called Spineworld where i want to have my internship, thier game is fully isometrical so i need to work up a portfolio with things that somewhat resembles thier style.

First up is a Bridge

I will soon add a railing to the top wich means ill prollyhave to redo alot of stuff. but im doing this to get a feeling for the shading etc.




So, this is my finished product.




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