- Making the neck more noticeable, and showing the traps more
(When you say bust do you mean the shoulder + head or his chest/abs?)
Judging from the outlines, I sense a neck now. Sorry for the bust confusion, I meant pectoral + abdominal. anyway. I cant see an exagerated triangle anymore. Ok with me.
- Made the arms more muscular, and more anatomically correct (I hope).
- Made the forearms bigger and the wrists smaller.
I still have a problem with your forearms, too rectilinear. really need curves (by outline or by shading...)
This reference (crappy gif rendering but hey
) could help:
Messie de dune - cover art and
also cleaner version but cropped-I've tried to make the ankle more prominant (i'll change it a bit more) and a bit of the calf, though from the position of his leg/foot i don't think you'd see a lot of the calf. (correct me if i'm wrong please)
Talking about the right leg, your thigh is not fat enough to match the calf, besides, the man is seated so the thig as a muscle should react accordingly. For the left leg, this is a matter of correct shading and I cant help more at this point, as I am not skilled to reproduce exact human anatomy.
Anyway, AFAICS, your second drawing feels more correct than the first. So hang on!