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Pixel Art / Not another fighter sprite...
« on: April 08, 2006, 01:03:51 am »
'fraid so  ;D

I made this originally for the King of Spriters thing in the other topic, it's my first attempt at doing clothing in this style. The guy has no face, not because I like the look but because I can't get it to look right. He either looks to cartoony or retarded, or both. Anyway the hands were a pain too I just gave up in the end ot was annoying me that much.



Anyway if C+C and if you want to have a go at giving him a face, then by all means do, I always welcome edits.


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Pixel Art / Re: First piece posted, WIP
« on: April 07, 2006, 02:23:08 am »
Yeah the feet look kinda off, the biggest problem though is the yellow shades. So I've done an edit to give you a quick idea. (if it's slanted slightly, it's due to drinking excessive amounts of alcohol, I'm sorry if it's really bad :P). I've boosted the colours slightly but you can easily fix that when it's done.



I've no idea what the boots are meant to look like, it looks kinda messy down there. The magic shit I imagine should be glowing so you creating a glow on his body and want from it would improve the sprite.

Anyway that's enough from me.

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Pixel Art / Re: More Conventional
« on: April 07, 2006, 12:36:57 am »
If you wanna colour lines, buy a colouring book... They even come with crayons these days too. (try not to eat them).

Anyway Kudos to the guy who spotted this as a copy, I was gonna crit this on his colouring but now I'm not even sure he did that.

Seriously, you won't learn fuck all from ripping off other peoples work and changing the colours round. Well, you'll learn how easy it is to get caught and annoy people, but artistically... No.

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Pixel Art / Re: lil'alien fighter
« on: April 05, 2006, 08:33:26 pm »
Yeah, those perfect 45% angles kinda throw it off, get rid of those and it should be a lot better.

Other than what's been said I'm really not sure about the chest area or what's going on there, it looks to me like you've tried to add every little detail in there with a darker shade but now it looks really cluttered and messy.

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Pixel Art / Re: Basic fighter sprite
« on: April 05, 2006, 04:13:06 pm »
I don't think I'll mess with this one anymore for the time being, I made the mistake of having no reference points when I made it so it's hardly suprising it's full of errors. Anatomy is too much of a weakness for me, so instead I'll wait for that stupidly large order I've placed on books from Amazon on the subject to arrive.

I really shouldn't have got that credit card :P

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Pixel Art / Re: Basic fighter sprite
« on: April 05, 2006, 03:03:44 pm »
Ok, I've reduced the colour count to 16. I don't like it as much like this. I could reduce the colours to about 20 and it be ok I think, but this seems a little too low in my opinion. I really would have been screwed if I used the old colour combination :P

Anyway I've made a few slight alterations based on what has been said, the only thing I haven't changed is the tail, which I'm undecided about.



I promise though, the next sprite I do will not contain 30 colours or more, unless of course the character is wearing pants like these...
  ;D

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Pixel Art / Re: car
« on: April 05, 2006, 03:59:25 am »
I know, that pic I posted is a toy based off the car... Somewhat :P



Don't think the tyres need much if any highlighting.

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Pixel Art / Re: car
« on: April 05, 2006, 03:44:16 am »
Is this the car?   ;D

After looking at the proper pictures of the car I can see what you mean about the bonnet now, I thought it looked kinda weird with the bonnet like that in your pixel work but the actual car has a weird looking bonnet heh so you can ignore that edit :P

The main thing were the alloys anyway the rest was fine.

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Pixel Art / Re: Basic fighter sprite
« on: April 04, 2006, 06:11:30 pm »
Thanks for the feedback, Anatomy is a very weak point with me, I tend to make silly mistakes like that.

I'm not too sure about the upper arm edit, but the elbow is definetly getting added.

Oh and good point about the dithering, that'll be gone in the next edit too.

Thanks again.

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Pixel Art / Re: car
« on: April 04, 2006, 06:03:45 pm »
I'm not too good with describing what is wrong so I made an edit, I was going to do more but I didn't get chance to. I also haven't added any new colours.

The main part I editted were the alloys, they just seemed dull and boring, so I added a highlight and some AA too. They could still do with some work, but the general gist is there. I slightly editted the side and front aswell. On the front, I noticed you tried to smooth the transition of the lighter tone with the darker tone. I didn't think this was really necessary so I removed that.



Hope that helps you out. Nice job by the way  :)

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