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Pixel Art / Re: My first tree
« on: September 28, 2017, 01:58:49 pm »
I'm trying to learn how to make plants,do you think there's something to improve?

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Pixel Art / Re: My first tree
« on: September 27, 2017, 01:06:14 pm »
Also tried to do a little bush

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Pixel Art / Re: Critique for Mushroom Monster
« on: September 22, 2017, 02:37:54 pm »
I really like the concept and how you made the cap,but something is wrong with the body:The outline makes a lot of contrat so it should be present only on the outer borders of the figure and shouldn't be inside the shape.Also the legs look strange,probably because of that straight 4 pixel brown line between them.Also add the other arm

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Pixel Art / Re: My other cat,Micia
« on: September 21, 2017, 01:48:00 pm »
tried to fix it and shade it better.Dimmed a bit the light grey and tried to shade and add texture(this thread really helped me:)

Also tried to follow your tips but don't know if I did it well

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Pixel Art / Re: My other cat,Micia
« on: September 21, 2017, 05:55:34 am »
Pretty good shapes and some good shading blocks.


U should get rid of the light area on the tail and along the back.
It's making a sharp bezel as if it's an 45 degree angled plane.

Instead try adding some more organic blobs of light on the shoulder.
For the tail, we don't need a gradient to know its curved so try just making the section/s that catch the most light be the lighter colour.
Thanks you for the advice,but I don't exactly know what do you mean with"organic blobs of light",can you link me some good example of this type of lighting?
I'm also not sure about the shading on the belly,should I edit it?

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Pixel Art / My other cat,Micia
« on: September 20, 2017, 01:23:13 pm »
here's my other kitty,Micia.
She is very shy and has short legs;she always walks unched over,and doesn't like open spaces;she behaves like if she has to hide from a rapacious ready to grab her.
She always follows Pallino and assists him when asking for food,but she lets him be the one who talks(or meows)

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Pixel Art / Re: Evil squid
« on: September 20, 2017, 05:52:08 am »
Very useful tip,I'll remember that.thank you :)

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Pixel Art / Re: Evil squid
« on: September 19, 2017, 03:19:46 pm »
Wow thanks,never tought you could AA a dark purple line with such a different color as that green

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Pixel Art / Evil squid
« on: September 19, 2017, 11:00:54 am »
Don't know what this is,I just imagined it and did it,but I think there are a lot of errors(especially in the tantacles),but I don't know exactly where

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Pixel Art / Re: My first tree
« on: September 17, 2017, 08:59:03 pm »
Main concern is the viewing angle and shape. Looking at the ground it tells we're looking from an above perspective. but the top of the tree isn't. I'd cover a bit more of the branches connecting with the trees crown to enhance that. I like the green palette  :y:

is that what you meant?

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