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Pixel Art / Re: Long Time Witness, First Time Offender
« on: January 10, 2008, 04:23:38 pm »
Neato stuff, I like your style. Only crit I have is the bottom right (yellow) one is almost totally unreadable. Might need a color change or drop a few details that are cluttering it up, not sure which.

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Weird Space Magic Hair Guy...thing..... o.0
« on: January 10, 2008, 05:35:19 am »
Thanks for the tip

The hand is supposed to be out front with the palm facing away from him and his fingers spread.

The other flat one was an abandoned project I started a few weeks ago when I started pixeling for the first time. I was using it to show how much I had grown in the past few weeks thanks to the help from the users on this forum   :)

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Pixel Art / [WIP] Weird Space Magic Hair Guy...thing..... o.0
« on: January 09, 2008, 07:05:50 pm »
When I started this piece was trying to do some kind of abstract new age shape thing...but I ended up giving him a (semi) normal body. Hes dressed in what looks like a space age fashion trend of the future, I guess. And for some reason he is magical.... umm yeah... :P....I am currently hating the hand with a passion, any suggestions would help. I tried layering the spell effect over the hand, but it became unrecognizable/blurry at normal viewing size. Not sure what to do with the hair or face either.  :-\


Small Edit: (Bah now I cant decide which one)


More edits:

 1/10/08 --------  1/11/08 (Latest)

Final:


I mostly just want comments/suggestions on those three parts, but feel free to critique anything in the piece most harshly as it is the only way I will improve.

If it were not for a few nice commenters a few weeks ago I would still be drawing things like this ->

Makes me want to gag.... :crazy:

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Pixel Art / Re: Some Graphics for my RPG game.
« on: January 03, 2008, 04:03:00 pm »
The texture is very concentrated (for lack of a better word), almost look like wood. I think the phrase, "Less is more" applies here.

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP]Blue Airplane
« on: January 03, 2008, 03:27:24 am »
Much better  :y:  ;D

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP]Blue Airplane
« on: January 03, 2008, 12:07:45 am »
The biggest problems I see are:

1) The propeller has the wrong perspective, try copy and pasting the circle you are using behind it and make the propeller fit into that shape. That should help you make it look right.
2) The far rear stabilizer has a totally different perspective. Not sure if you wanted to make it look titled, but as it is it just doesn't look right.

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Soldier (Show me how to proceed)
« on: January 02, 2008, 09:03:18 pm »
Update!

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] My tetris clone need some c&c on teh pixels
« on: January 02, 2008, 05:30:21 pm »
Quote from: Chris Oden on January 01, 2008, 11:50:19 am
I've made some edits, trying to fit faces in a 6x6 box. also lowered the contrast on the bricks and changed the color.
Does it get too messy with the cracks?
I'm thinking of doing an animated guy on the left side but that might be way too much for my experience but on the other hand this
whole project is for practicing everything that has to do with game making...
Hmm...




Also, the R:255 G:0 B:255 is transparent.
The game is in fullscreen so every pixel gets pretty big.

The yellow one looks a little too much like the coin blocks in Mario games. ;D

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Pixel Art / Re: hero
« on: January 02, 2008, 05:27:59 pm »
Me likey!  A few things that popped out in my mind. I assume the one pixel shift in position when he had his shield up is him blocking a blow, as it is right now it almost looks like a mistake. Maybe shift his torso back the pixel but keep his feet in the same position, shouldn't be that difficult an edit. Also the twirl attack is smooth, but looks unrealistic. If he came off the ground (like he jumped) a bit I think it would be more believable. Other than that, good work. I wish I could create something so nice.  :)

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Pixel Art / Re: Blue the blob
« on: December 29, 2007, 06:32:02 am »
It is my avatar so I didn't want it to move too much.

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