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Pixel Art / Re: Run Animation (Turned View) C+C
« on: December 13, 2016, 07:37:02 pm »
Quote from: Ashedragon on December 13, 2016, 03:00:50 am
I'm still pretty new to animation myself, so while I can't offer a lot of critique, I can say that the pacing, the framerate, makes it seem more like an eccentric walk or a jog than a run. It's very slow and deliberate. You might want to play around with removing some frames and exaggerating the poses. Maybe find a good reference to latch onto?

Real silly of me. I definitely slowed the frame rate down to get a better look at the limbs sway. Though in the end it's pretty clear that lone isn't the only fix. I agree its a distraction and makes it hard to differentiate between a jog/walk/or slow run here.

Thanks for the feedback.

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Pixel Art / Run Animation (Turned View) C+C
« on: December 13, 2016, 01:48:47 am »


Looking to get some critique on this bit of work I'm doing. I'm just trying to set a base for future animations of the same style. I feel as though the shape of the legs on a few frames lose volume, but I'm having a difficult time adding anything back and keep the same visual.

Thanks in advance for any help!

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