Thanks so much for all the feedback! I realized I miscommunicated what the character is supposed to be, it's intended to be a kind of noble traveler girl and not so much a schoolgirl!
Everyone helped a lot with the hairband and the contrast was definitely a problem, thanks Ellian. I'll work on that and the colors more.
PileDriver, your advice about describing the garment better helped a lot, I realized that covering the top part with the bow thing made it unclear if it was a coat (open at the top) or a cloak, but it's meant to be a cloak... I did some changes to try to represent it better, maybe there's still a way to include a bow thing. I wish I knew how to describe forms with so few colors and big clusters like in your edits, it would make animation much easier.
Attempt at simplification ~_~