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Pixel Art / Re: The finishing touch "hopefully" WIP
« on: November 27, 2012, 06:14:05 pm »
haha, ya to me it looks like a kid growing inside sting ray :crazy:
It is sure a interesting sprite, i don't know what you want to do with it?
were you thinking of putting it in a game, animation or just some concept art?
who is it directed at is it just for yourself or what audience are you going to show it to?
"delete" i think the kid in the sting ray could use some work, to me he needs a belly button or something..haha"delete"
-edit- tried to put a belly button on the sprite  :-[... ya no the way you got it looks awesome -edit-
But then again this is all coming from a guy who just started pixel art like 3 months ago, so don't take any of my advice  :blind:

I actually really like your sprites quirkiness. I really hope you post some more.
Looking forward to them  ;D

chris,

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Pixel Art / Re: Platform character Jill, 32x32 bit. Critique anyone?
« on: November 27, 2012, 03:54:21 am »
Thanks!  ;D
i love your shading skillz
 :yell: i want those shading skillz! lol  :P
I'll just steal that walk animation  ;) -edit-  ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) ;) (i was using sarcasm on this sentence) clearly does not work like it does in real life but, eh live and learn -edit-
thanks again

chris,

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General Discussion / Re: Help im new!
« on: November 27, 2012, 01:58:33 am »
here is where you officially introduce yourself:
http://www.wayofthepixel.net/index.php?topic=6976.250

Ya all of Harvey dents links i would read first but here is a couple more:

This is for low res walking animation:
http://www.manningkrull.com/pixel-art/walking.php

PixelPileDriver got a unfinished blog that i am currently reading:
http://ppdaniatlas.blogspot.com/

But all the links harvey posted i would read first

Welcome SalahKun to the forums!  ;D

Looking forward to see your work ;)

chris,

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Pixel Art / Re: Sci Fi Pixel Art Critique
« on: November 27, 2012, 01:44:47 am »
I'm pretty new to this so i can't really give a good critique.
I think all the stuff you got there looks ok.
Just curious what is the 8th thing to the right, a suit?
Anyways great work hope to see more  ;D

chris

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Pixel Art / Platform character Jill, 32x32 bit
« on: November 26, 2012, 08:00:49 pm »
Hello,
this character ties into my previous post:
(merged and shown above)~PPd

I am making the second main character to my game. I am still quite new to this, so all advice is appreciated. So the character i am trying to create here, is Jill like from the nursery ryhme Jack and jill. This sprite was heavily influenced by PixelPiledriver's Jack sprite he made for me. I really suck at colors and don't know what to do. I tried by best for trying to incorporated different shades of color, but i as you can tell i could still use help. The character is set in like older times like mediveal. She is wearing a bonnet. her clothes are red and white, but im thinking of changing since this sprite gives me too much of a "little red ridding hood" vibe. Which i havn't decided if that is a good thing or not. I am trying to make this character cute. I don't really know what kind of colors i should use to convey this. I also don't know how to make a moving sprite of this character. I wasted alot of time on the Jack sprite to move and was hoping for someone to demonstate how this is accomplished  :crazy:
Here is some reference work i used:



These are the two things i want:

1. How do i make a moving sprite of this character

2. A critique of this character

This is the sprite:




k well ppd here is my graceful run cycle:








 :crazy: ...i hate run cycles...
-edit-here is the one with arms moving:


-edit- My "attempt" at this the body does not have motion, but that is next on my list. Anymore critiques on the jack run cycle or jill character would be appreciated.
I am trying to get the whole sprite moving in my run cycle like arms, legs, head bobbing, will post all updates of my run cycle

-edit- oh i almost forgot the character in this run cycle is in no way my character i did not create this character at all this was all my very poor adaptation of the Pixelpiledrivers character in a run cycle..

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Pixel Art / Re: GB Style puzzle game [C&C]
« on: October 17, 2012, 12:51:11 am »
ya for the character sprite on the left, The ones facing left look like they have a larger eye then they do when facing right. but i am just totally new to pixel art (been doing it for a week) so mabe you did that on purpose.
I honestly like the art style, your doing great!   :y:
 looking forward to your revised level  ;D

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Pixel Art / Re: making a character
« on: October 15, 2012, 12:20:09 am »
wow that looks good  :'(
i wish i could do it half as good as you..
I kinda gave up on trying to make him 16x16 with a bucket it does not seem possible at this point
i tried again making him with bells can any1 let me know if im improving? i tried using not as many colors does any1 see improvements?
I am also having a hard time making characters in the side view, and trying to give my sprites personality and showing there emotions. the only thing i think i can really do is change my characters skin tone. Like make his face red when angry, or is there a way to give characters 16x16 eyebrows of sorts?



any ideas or examples would be appreciated

update first sprite!  ;D




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General Discussion / Re: Read the Rules, then introduce yourself here.
« on: October 05, 2012, 02:26:25 am »
Hello,
I am totally new to pixel art, i just started a month ago. I got into pixel art b/c i am starting to make a platform game. I pretty much finished the design document and just begining to get concept art. I am trying hard to find all that there is on this subject and will be on here to help anyone in any way possible. Looking forward to being a long time member :)

thanks,

Chris,

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Pixel Art / New concept art
« on: October 01, 2012, 07:03:13 pm »
I would like someone to critique



Hello,
I was quite hesitant on giving away to much of my game design document but if it will help me get a better critique i guess its worth the risk. I will leave out most of the details but hopefully you will get the general idea/story of the game.
I am trying to make a platform game, the story involves all the jack tales into one. It starts with jack and jill they go to a wishing well. Jill makes a wish. Shit goes down Giant picks her up goes to castle. He makes minons candles which he sends after Jack. Jack then jumps over the candles in the game. Forest lvl.beanstalk lvl. castle lvl.
My game is directed towards a younger audience, I am trying to make my characters as cute as possible. I was trying to make my characters 16x16, just for a simple starter game. I am having trouble making sprite characters as you can see. I am quite a beginner at this. I am hoping for some examples anyone can give me to get on the right track. I was thinking on giving the main character jack a bucket for a helment to make him stand out more. But i am having a very hard time making the bucket, it just seems like a brown block on his head. I also was thinking on making jack more of a joker, or a clown with bells on his hands and feet. But the orginal story i have worked out involves the bucket.
Thank you so much for the people that have helped me get adjusted to the forums so far. I really appreciate it.

chris,

here is some concept art:
here the artist link if you like his work:
http://graphicdesign.rrc.mb.ca/08-09_GD2/dalleyn/index.html


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