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Pixel Art / Re: [VISUALS PUZZLES] Characters, minimalist pop culture design
« on: January 23, 2016, 10:42:22 pm »
not sure how to critique this.  what do you think needs improvement?  though it is in jpg and has more colors than needed

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Pixel Art / Re: Houses. Firts steps in pixel art.
« on: January 22, 2016, 06:50:48 pm »
here's a technique breakdown.  i mainly focused on the roof, but you could apply it to any area.  the overall message is more clean and focused pixeling.  Your drawing is great, but for it to be great pixel art, the pixels have to be very controlled.  note the edit is still quite messy.  it could be cleaned up further, but i think youll get the idea.

as for the outlines.  generally hey are better used to add definition to an edge, but they can flatten the form pretty quickly, so if it isn't needed to see the edge, consider omitting it


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Pixel Art / Re: (Re)starting with pixel art
« on: January 22, 2016, 01:15:18 am »
Legs and shoes look good. The rest up needs lots of work :] the arms seem very awkward looking. I'm all for nubs but he execution looks strange. Looks like a chicken. You also suffer from banding but that's easy to fix

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Pixel Art / Re: Houses. Firts steps in pixel art.
« on: January 21, 2016, 11:22:41 pm »
just trying some ideas.  i shouldve worked harder on this one -.- cuz your houses are pretty lovely imo



i think the animal portraits could use a buff too

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Pixel Art / Re: [C+C] Themed Characters
« on: January 20, 2016, 02:01:09 am »
I think everything looks great and a little awkwardness in the poses and actions may actually be cute in this case

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Pixel Art / Re: [C+C] Pixel art for a Monster Fighter needing some critique
« on: January 19, 2016, 11:37:55 pm »
Quote from: Tals on January 19, 2016, 08:40:52 pm
A dash of blue does make it look more natural, but it's meant to have that unnatural black glossiness, the creature is based on a power cable.

first off im not a good artist, i just have observed enough to be able to critique  :D

about the power cable, then my critique would be to push this design aspect further so it is obvious.

i hope this gives u ideas, but the execution is really bad on my edit  ;D 


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Pixel Art / Re: [C+C] Pixel art for a Monster Fighter needing some critique
« on: January 19, 2016, 08:12:38 pm »
That's wonderful!!!!!! 1000% improvement. The green color is adding nothing, however. Too similar to the black.  Color choices may still be reconsidered. There's no reason imo you need 4 blacks. And the green may as well be a 5th. You don't have to go crazy with hue shifts. Just enough to make sense while distinguishing colors within a limited palette and adding visual appeal. It is also generally recommended to avoid pure blacks or whites in PA  because it looks unnatural and I believe is said to flatten your image BUT I'm not sure that would apply in this case. But I do not think you need so many pure blacks. Try adding some blue in there. Not much to say it is dark blue, but enough to tell on inspection.

Idk. I still feel you can learn more about color in this project of yours

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Challenges & Activities / Re: The Daily Sketch
« on: January 18, 2016, 06:44:11 pm »
@ PPD yessssssssssssssss love it!


@wolfenoctis  that is... audacious :>

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Challenges & Activities / Re: The Daily Sketch
« on: January 17, 2016, 06:05:36 pm »
so cool wolfenoctis.  do you do live sketches?  it'd be fun to watch

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Pixel Art / Re: [C+C] Historic costumes
« on: January 17, 2016, 05:46:07 am »
cool :) is there something that looks off to you or a look youre going for that youre struggling with? i love the concept and the execution is cute

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