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Is the opponent supposed to be massive?
Hard to give pixel crits on this because they are so far from polished. Will be back around with more detail when it moves out of the rough stage of things.
For a rough animation, this is pretty good.
Just be careful with that back of his, I don't think it should be a clean cleaved line.
yeah.... my anatomy sucks
Where's Soda Popinski? Or Bald Bull? Or Max?
That aside, I think you're off to a good start. The animation is pretty dynamic and fluid. I don't particularly care for the colors which seem to be too saturated and murky. Everything could use some smoothing out, but I assume that most of this was just roughed in for now. That's all I got at the moment.
Figured might as well post a singular thread and just throw all of the images in here, as I progress. Anyway, I'm currently working on character design, mostly animation and what not. Right now trying o get the side view finalized and started working on the walking animation. Here is the progress on both so far:
PS: Sorry for double posting this, as there is already a thread about this on second page, but if mods could just delete it I'd appreciate it =D Honestly I should have started with a broader title to begin with. Oh also I did end up removing the back hand on the side view =)
Anyway any critique and commentary is always welcome.
[Edit] Bah had to make a quick fix on the top pixel row of the sideview x.x
[Edit2] Just added the walking sideview. I think I gotta raise the sole of the front foot a bit to make it look more like walking and less like gliding o.0
I think he meant on the lightning, to make it much more...lightningingy. Cuz, you know, lightning is light....and bright.
But I agree: great jorb.
Lightning is but a tad bit too heavily outlined, I think. Also, usage of pure white would probably be completely acceptable (even recommendable) in this case.
Other than that, great job O:!
have so much to do....
I had an attempt at pixel art some time ago though gave up when I got disheartened after changing an old RCT monitor for a LCD one and finding out how crappy I actually was at this.
Though I figure I would never improve if I don't keep practicing so here's another go.
I redid the legs a couple of times but I just can't seem to get the position right, so any suggestions on that as well as any other aspect to improve this overall would be appreciated.
