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Pixel Art / Re: My first Rpg sprite (I Hope)
« on: December 09, 2006, 04:34:36 pm »
Slightly overhead perspective, yes?  It's good that the eyes are low on the head.  However, he's got too much of a neck for that view (I have the same problem with my sprites)

Right now the body is just a big rectangle.  Try to give him more shape. 

Pixel Art / Re: RPG Sprite Base
« on: November 15, 2006, 10:06:32 am »

Pixel Art / Re: Another RPG Sprite : Black Wizard
« on: August 26, 2006, 02:01:59 pm »
Reminds me of Final Fantasy Tactics(which only makes sense since I see your original base was a FFT edit).  I think the first head looks more wizardly with the beard, but the second head is cooler and more evil looking. 

Pixel Art / Re: Girl Scene WIP
« on: August 14, 2006, 01:33:55 am »
Her right arm seems to be at a possible, but uncomfortable, angle.  It doesn't feel like it's going forward into the background enough.

The left arm simply appears too short and the wrist looks like a painful position as well.

Pixel Art / Re: rpg girl
« on: August 11, 2006, 12:47:30 am »
No glaring flaws, and good character design.  Excellent work.  I agree that the dark spot on the back of the head and the hair right below it looks a bit iffy though. 

Pixel Art / Re: atempt at a platform character
« on: August 10, 2006, 10:03:04 pm »
His height should shift up and down during the walk.  When the legs are straight below him, perpendicular to the ground, he would be at his tallest.  Likewise, when one leg is most forward, and the other most backwards, he should be at his shortest.  By having him stay the same height, you are actually making his legs stretch and compress unrealisticly.

For the jump, he should definitely bend his knees prejump.  To simply fly off into the air like that is impossible.  The exception to this is if you want instant reactivity, like in super mario brothers.  In which case you would need to use a good jumping sound to give it life.  Of course since this is just a "if I ever make a game" stage, yeah, knee-bend

Pixel Art / Re: Running Sprite. w.i.p
« on: April 23, 2006, 08:13:50 pm »
I think he should lean forward to emphasize that he is running and not just powerwalking or something.  It definitely needs those 2 extra frames so you can get some up/down movement in there.  A run is basically a series of very forward very short hops afterall.

Pixel Art / Re: Rpg sprite- girl
« on: March 18, 2006, 08:21:08 pm »
First the arms... they should swing at the shoulder, not the elbow.  There should be very little or no elbow swinging at all unless she is powerwalking.

Next the legs. . . you did a good job with the light/dark shading for depth, but the legs need to get shorter when they aren't perpendicular to the ground, and especially the lower leg when the foot is picked up. . . speaking of which, the feet need to come off the ground.

Pixel Art / Re: same old same old (RPG sprites)
« on: March 04, 2006, 07:28:22 am »

Been a long time since an update.  Anyway, she's taller while wearing the pink dress due to her shoes (done on purpose).  Also I figured out I needed to tone down the glare on her hair.  Otherwise, not much has changed

Pixel Art / Re: Anatomy check
« on: March 04, 2006, 03:09:32 am »
His chest is flat and shoulders nonexistant.  The cloak is definitely the best looking thing.  It looks alright, just really un-refined, especially in the face and feet

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