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Pixel Art Feature Chest / Re: Sir Gregory & Creya
« on: September 27, 2013, 06:22:12 pm »
Yeah, looks great , I am seeing more of the mentioned character traits; defensive/withdrawn, aloof/proud, in him now too.
I was assuming title/cut screen earlier, so all the other stuff makes more sense. Eyes could still do with some more experimentation maybe, I'm sorta seeing two pupils looking at extreme left & right; could make the other material more obvious? stronger colour, glowing etc.
Maybe a bit early yet with Creya (need mo' comic shadows) but the ponytail looks a bit 2D; I'd expect it to project more behind her, and her thighs look quite thin. Her outfit looks a bit basic/placeholdery yet? Could be fun adapting/subverting some more of that massive frilly Victorian stuff.
I was assuming title/cut screen earlier, so all the other stuff makes more sense. Eyes could still do with some more experimentation maybe, I'm sorta seeing two pupils looking at extreme left & right; could make the other material more obvious? stronger colour, glowing etc.
Maybe a bit early yet with Creya (need mo' comic shadows) but the ponytail looks a bit 2D; I'd expect it to project more behind her, and her thighs look quite thin. Her outfit looks a bit basic/placeholdery yet? Could be fun adapting/subverting some more of that massive frilly Victorian stuff.