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Pixel Art / Re: run animation
« on: July 30, 2007, 04:52:30 pm »
good point. how did i miss that.
thanks for the edit, too. i don't think i would have gotten it quite as clearly without it.


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Pixel Art / Re: run animation
« on: July 30, 2007, 04:09:36 pm »
first off, i'll mention that i'm going to worry about the legs and body movement right now, and i'll leave the arms for later, but i do intend to make them a little less wild.

so as soon as the word "floating" was mentioned, i totally understood what you guys meant. so i put a little more bounce in his run, and i'm hoping that i'm coming closer to a solid run animation.
well, here's my edit, complete without any running around in circles at all:



also, ignore the hair. but we've been good about that anyway.

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Pixel Art / Re: run animation
« on: July 28, 2007, 04:03:14 pm »
thanks for all the replies, and sorry i haven't been near my computer since i posted it originally.
i haven't had a whole lot of time to edit it yet, but i will say that there are two frames where no foot is touching the ground. but i'm not denying that he doesn't get any hang time, so here's a quick edit. let me know if i'm on the right track. also, there's a little bit of shake in the animation, like i didn't align everything properly when i leaned him over just a bit, and i'll get that fixed.
also, i giggled a little bit at the ninja comments. it's not really supposed to be ninja-y at all, to be honest. but i was liking the idea of a little bit more horizontal of a run. i think it's a good way to emphasize speed, i guess. here's some artwork:



EDIT: i went ahead and made it a little bit smoother, and i should work on stuff before i post it up here all willy nilly. i could have skipped like three steps:


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Pixel Art / run animation
« on: July 27, 2007, 10:58:37 pm »
trying out my first ever run cycle. i was hoping for some feeeeeedback

first:

latest:

sorry for no transparency

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Pixel Art / Re: Sweater Kaneda
« on: April 01, 2007, 08:25:53 pm »
i don't know. i played around with a couple different ways of changing the straight line left leg, but they all looked awkward. i think your edit makes him look like he has a freaky, deformed super knee. especially compared to the other knee.

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Pixel Art / Re: Sweater Kaneda
« on: March 31, 2007, 02:11:33 am »
well, if two people say its bothersome, then i'll take a shot at changing it:
newold
good? bad?

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Pixel Art / Re: Sweater Kaneda
« on: March 30, 2007, 03:04:52 pm »
hmm..i guess we'll just have to agree to disagree   :)

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Pixel Art / Re: Sweater Kaneda
« on: March 29, 2007, 02:37:52 pm »
latest edit:
taking pretty much all of the advice you gave, i've done a major overhaul with your edit as a reference. i'm still not done, obviously, but this was a big step forward.
i have to admit, this is the first time someone has made an edit of my work, and it was a little awkward feeling, but honestly, it made me learn to be a better pixel artist, so thanks.
oh yeah, i kept the knees a the same hight  :D

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Pixel Art / Re: Sweater Kaneda
« on: March 28, 2007, 03:49:42 pm »

ok. that's it. done.  :'( (tears of joy) a few minor edits. i'll probably be the only one who notices them, but oh well
I am loving the whole picture, except I would just think that on his left leg you would not be able to see his ankle? Or am I wrong there? That's just in contrast to the right leg, is all.
well, i made it so that the bottom of each pant leg lined up, and just drew in some ankles.  i wanted the cuffs to be a little high, so i guess i'm going to leave it like that.
anyway, thanks for all the help with this project, and now i'll go ahead and start on Tetsuo...

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Pixel Art / Re: Sweater Kaneda
« on: March 28, 2007, 04:30:18 am »

First thing I noticed is the collar, it should have more volume - a sweater isn't paper thin. I'd move it up a pixel or two.
i'm not sure if you know this, but Kaneda wears a shirt underneath the sweater, and i was hoping that it would look like the collar is coming out from behind the sweater. either way, i did a small edit on the collar to try and seperate it a little bit more and bring it up a bit, as you suggested. and you were right about the red stripe, i totally missed it when doing one of my edits.
also, newer version of the pants, and i think i'm done with them, unless someone just absolutley hates them..
so...is this thing nearing 100% or what?

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