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Pixel Art / Re: [WiP] Game project "Jobel" mock-up
« on: January 13, 2007, 02:16:13 am »
yours                                              Mine


looked a bit busy and overdithered.  i simply added a new tone, that could smooth out the darker outlines, removed some of the (in my opinion) overdither,  and removed some of the "wrinkles" that made him look less muscular. 

take note of *his* right arm. there you can see i used that extra tone, started to AA, and removed some of the "UN-necessary" wrinkles.


also, edited his eyes and lips a bit, but not sure i did well there. 

lastly, i removed some of the wrinkles on his left arm and chest, and smoothed that out a bit.

i probably butchered the style, but then again, i think this matches the style of the mock up better.

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Pixel Art / Re: Rocking Robot
« on: January 10, 2007, 02:50:30 am »
few crits

-spray can bg is a no-no, i would just use transparency if i was you.
- the hair is a bit to thin, and needs some thickening up and texture.
- to make this look a bit more realistic, perhaps change the black outlines to a darker shade of the inner color?
- fix his eye, it looks awkward.
- adding more contrast to the colors would be nice.  i would defiantly use some darker shades.

anyway, this is a really nice piece, but with a few tweaks, could be a bit nicer. 

who knocked you out anyway?  i don't remmember.


(also, next botp, maby you should post your work before you submit it, this way you can improve it  ;) :P
)

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Pixel Art / Re: Wip Grassy Mountain Waterfall Scene
« on: January 10, 2007, 02:24:32 am »
looking very nice so far, ill post an edit in a Minute.

alright, the point of this edit is to show you how the water should fall on the rocks.  notice how its got a (near) right angle on the dropoff, and its not curvy.

ignore the crappy rocks, i cant be bothered to do decent ones now.


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Pixel Art / Re: Boss Sprite WIP
« on: January 09, 2007, 10:52:10 pm »
;D  i really like this one =)  only recommendation is to make the glass on his brain a bit more transparent or watery looking, and to give him claws

is it based on stegosaurus?

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Pixel Art / Re: My first attempt at pixel art - redoing a wallpaper in pixel.
« on: January 08, 2007, 10:28:04 pm »
Quote from: staticfields on January 08, 2007, 10:14:00 pm
Quote from: eck on January 08, 2007, 10:12:20 pm
both of your links dont work.
I'm using waffleimages to host these, and I can see them just fine. Is there a certain imagehost on this site that we're recomended to use?

o'rly?



try imageshack.us...

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Pixel Art / Re: Monsters in Chinese tales
« on: January 08, 2007, 10:26:04 pm »
welcome to pixelation!

to tired to crit anything as is right now, because I'm so tired my head is practically laying on the keyboard.  just wanted to drop in and say that these look great overall, and hope that you will post more of your work here  ;D

in a bit, post the one or two that you think are the best, and ill crit on em when I'm less tired.

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Pixel Art / Re: My first attempt at pixel art - redoing a wallpaper in pixel.
« on: January 08, 2007, 10:12:20 pm »
both of your links dont work.

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Pixel Art / Re: Pixel goddess
« on: January 07, 2007, 11:43:06 pm »
actually, she and her boyfriend were swimming in a lake, naked, and she got up, stole her boyfriends cloths, and ran  :lol: :P

yeah, as stated before, a few anatomy problems.

 if you decide to remake this piece, i wouldn't make her gold like this.

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Pixel Art / Re: Lineart Exchange. Because I only like doing half the work.
« on: January 06, 2007, 08:44:39 pm »
chaos, mind if i color the bottem one in?

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Pixel Art / Re: Evil clown
« on: January 02, 2007, 09:26:01 pm »
first, let me say that this is a very nice wip indeed, and it looks like it will turn out well. 

the main problems i see with this piece is that it just doesn't look "evil" like the reference.  he needs to more... i don't know...  morbid.... i guess... try changing the palette on his face to a whitish tone fading into blue, and add more contrast.  make his lips dark, i would suggest a palette of dark reds/ near blacks.  also, if your not going to use a transparency, a black background would make the piece look darker overall.

i would make an edit, but sadly, i have no time.

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