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« on: February 14, 2007, 05:53:17 am »
Hi Welcome,
Nice pictures, my crit is as follows.
1st picture : the hair on our left blows particularly strange, I think add more frames to the animation currently 2 frames?
2nd picture : I don't understand the animation, is it rain on a window in front of her? cause it is in back of her and there is nothing falling directly below her. Also it doesn't loop well, and animating her would help too. Even if she just blinks or something.
3rd picture : the belt looks funny to me. I know the sword is hanging off of it which will pull it down but she is also holding the belt on her side. It doesn't make sense to wear a belt that can actaully fall straight off your body when you draw your sword?
4th picture : Strange lighting when she exhales, like flashes.
I like the sprites they are interesting. Keep up the good work!