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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP]Novice, working on smileys for another board C+C welcome
« on: March 26, 2011, 06:54:04 am »
Quote from: Tourist on March 26, 2011, 03:48:30 am
I haven't seen the show, so my comments are based only on the reference pic you included in your post.

Your pixels are two different sizes, 22 pix for the top row, 33 pix for the lower row.  

None of the creatures in the source pic have eyebrows, several of your creations do.  

Only one of the ponies has closed eyes (the white unicorn) and it has some sort of eyeshadow.  This works well to keep the shape and size of the eye visible while letting the dark eyelid control the expression.  Unless this character is an exception, consider adding this feature to your icons.  It serves a similar purpose to eyebrows (defining the eye socket shape).

  In the source image, the heads appear to be 5 units high.  One unit for the nose/mouth, two units for the eyes, one for the top of the head (which may be covered by hair) and one for the hair above the skull.  There is some variation, but this seems to be a reasonable average.
  Simply scaling the faces might not give you the desired results, however.  The nose and mouth are crammed into a small space, and shrinking this will make the faces less readable.  You might be able to squeeze one pixel out of this space, but I'm not sure you can get more than one pixel from here.  Losing the nostril would make the noses resemble beaks, so I think that becomes one of the limiting factors.  
  Keeping the lower part of the face means reducing the rest of the face a bit more.  With a bottom of jaw to bottom of eye distance of about 6 pixels, that leaves 26 for a 32 pixel face; 13 for the eyes, 13 for the head and hair, which should be plenty.  
  If you've only got 22 pixels for the icons then you would have to shave everything down.  Lose the nostril, shrink all of the features, possibly use a couple more colors in order not to distort the nose shape too badly.

In the source, the top of the skull is a bit higher than the base of the ear.  In some of your images this is not the case.  I think lowering the skull makes the ears look more like horns and less like ears, and should be avoided.

In the source, the mouth is never wider than the space between the eyes.  You use a wider mouth for more expression.  It's a trade between adherence to the source and your goals for expression.  I recommend trying both and see what you like better.

Hope this helps,
Tourist

Wow!  Awesome.  Thanks!  I don't get what you mean about the pixel size being different.  Both the top and bottom row are 23 pixels tall (I just went and looked to make sure), although the bottom ones are indeed one pixel wider than the top.  Mouth shapes tend to stretch in the show, like anime mouths, they can be really tiny or reeealy big.  Eyebrows aren't normally visible, but on some expressions in the show, they are.  There's a fair bit of variability to this.  Here, for instance:

(I don't intend to use this one, but it was helpful in getting me to the point I'm at now.)


But eyeshadow is a much better idea.

This was really helpful.  Thanks. 

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP]Novice, working on smileys for another board C+C welcome
« on: March 26, 2011, 01:12:25 am »
Quote from: Ixis on March 26, 2011, 12:31:05 am
Ah, "Friendship is Magic". Anyway,

I'd draw more of the heads from 3/4ths or the side. When they're straight on like that they do tend to look rounder and I could see someone mistaking them for a cat or some other animal. Anti-aliasing would help a little, but I think some stronger contrast in your color choices would help.

Ha, I've thought that while watching the show more than a few times.  They get pretty liberal with what a pony is supposed to look like.  Given the context, few people will confuse these for any animal besides a pony, but I agree that the ones where the she's staring straight-on tend to be the least interesting.  The tricky part about rotating her face aside is that it's easy to lose detail because all the far stuff has to be compressed.  I start getting pixels that want to latch onto eachother and she can look wall-eyed because there's no white space beyond the far eye to tell you which way her far eye is pointed.

The features I need MOST to stand out are the eyes and the mouth, as those are the bits that do the most expressing.  The ears can convery feeling as well.  Hence most of the contrast already there is between the eyes and everything else (Black on pastels).  The risk with setting the mouth darker is that the outline color is used around the entire face, and a dark face outline doesn't contrast with the eyes.  So I'll probably go in and cheat the mouth darker than the rest of the outline color.

Or I suppose I could lighten the facial yellow more?  As for the hair, it's not generally expressive (and I'm probably going to redo anger, because it's a bit too much right now), so I'd rather it contrast the eyes more than the facial tone (although as it is, I feel like it's easy enough to tell the hair and the face apart, if y'all are telling me it isn't, then I'll futz with it).  

It's kindof a balancing act between the show's aesthetic and the limits of the medium, as well as trying to find a way to keep all the colors from bleeding into eachother.

But I definitely hear what you're saying, and it's given me some things to try.

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP]Novice, working on smileys for another board C+C welcome
« on: March 25, 2011, 11:45:17 pm »
Quote from: pistachio on March 25, 2011, 11:32:22 pm
IMO, yes, they would benefit more from anti-aliasing... But not so much as they would a decent job of shading or more contrast.

And for some reason the heads seem a lot rounder than they are in the picture. It may be because the forehead sticks out more, or it may be a lack of a body. Or it may be inconsistencies with the eyes.

The lack of body certainly makes the heads seem rounder, but you're right:  In general, my images have rounder heads.  I was going for a foal, or child, sort of look, so this was somewhat intentional, but if it looks altogether wrong I could go back and try to narrow things up a bit.

I'll go back and up the contrast when I get the chance for sure (I've been working in Paint, and some of these fancier programs are really intimidating, so it's gonna take me a while to get used to them).  Shading is a bit more problematic in that the show is very flat-shaded, so it doesn't seem appropriate to do so here. 

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Pixel Art / [WIP]Novice, working on smileys for another board C+C welcome
« on: March 25, 2011, 10:16:58 pm »
Hi!  I started doing pixel art when I was 12 or so years old back in 1993 or so (always 2 colors), but it's been a long time since I've done any serious work.  I started posting at another board that has just plain awful smileys, and thought "I can do better!"  I'm just rediscovering how fun pixel art can be (and how frustrating!).  I'm a much better artist when I'm given limitations, so pixel art is up my alley.

The board in question is based around the latest My Little Pony series (which I never expected to be actually good), so the smileys are all ponies based around that show's designs (although I designed this character in particular).  Some of these are translations of much larger images, and some are faces I've come up with:

Current


Well previous


I'm happy with a few of these, and a couple need a lot of work, or perhaps complete redos.  In particular, winking (5th on the top), anger and fustration/irritation (bottom row) need some more love.  I've been tweaking and retweaking those endlessly and I'm never quite satisfied.

At this point, I'm just looking for general opinions and advice.
I basically stole the palette from the cartoon itself, using the eyedropper tool, and tweaked for more contrast to make the images more readable.

The sizing is a bit arbitrary, 23px tall, with unlimited width, which was an attempt to maintain enough room to convey expression without stretching a line of text too much vertically.

Are these readable?  I don't have much experience with antialiasing; would these images benefit greatly from it?  

Edit:  A reference image from the show, so you know the basic look I'm going for here:
 

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