Hello again, I began drawing a roman legionnaire a couple of days ago, pictured below ;


At first I was pretty pleased with how it turned out, but after I went to bed and woke up the next day I saw some glaring errors that I hadn't noticed last night.
This leads me to the current picture where I'm retooling the whole picture ;




This is the picture that matters. I was pleased with a couple of parts of the soldier such as the loincloth, the spear, sheat for the sword, helmet, feet, right arm and shield. Still, I'm pretty sure you guys can point out any things I've done badly in those parts so I would like some help with fixing those errors first before I continue on.

If that makes any sense, thanks in advance

Two legs for the secret agent :

There's a bit more oomph in the punch now, still the whole body needs to move. When you punch you use your whole body, stand up and punch the air with almost everything you got. You'll notice how your whole body transfers energy, beginning in the legs and all ending up in your fist.

What you should do too, is to make the animation smoother by adding two more frames at the end where he slowly pulls back his arm when he has punched. Add one more frame where he shifts his weight backwards before he punches too.

Err, he's my new icon.  Just seeing if anyone has any crits before i submit.

He's got a really stiff posture, that's what first struck my mind. Work on those legs, the right one (his right, I'm going to go all after his right/left) is pointing somewhere, and it's the same length as the left one that is almost crouching. This means he either has a really short right leg, or a really long left one. The arms are also off different length, his forearm appears to be longer than the bicep which is wrong, it should be the other way around. Most of these issues will work themselves out if you work on the pose of his, a stiff body makes it unattractive.

I'm confused and I don't know in what direction to go with this. I wanted it to be more detailed, but I've no idea how to properly texture this grassy hill 

Pick out a few shades of the green, and start making all the straws of grass. Give it some motion, make it seem as if the wind is blowing. Determine where you want the wind to come from, and form the grass. Add some darker and some lighter patches of grass on the hill, a hill that grows freely have patches where the grass grows faster and where it grows slower and doesn't soak up as much rain, giving it patches where it can be all lush and green and patches where the grass is almost yellow because it doesn't suck up as much rain as the other patches.

I think this picture shows a pretty good way on how the grass looks like on a hill similar to yours ;

Thanks for your reply
I have updated it. The darker leg for now just makes it distinct from the other. The chest now moves more smoothly.

Does she kick out too far? Swing her arms too far? Just want it to look natural. It's getting close I think.

I don't think she's kicking too far. Now you have to work on that cloth moving with the legs. Remember to make it 'push' out when her right leg is moving, and that it falls back when her left one is moving.