Thanks for the comments so far guys, though I hope someone has a more specific critique for my axe because I'm sure its not perfect.

I hope you can learn alittle form this(even though im not the best color picker) to kindof level out your image. Add some dark purple to the blue shades and some dark brownish reds to the yellows or oranges.

Your palettes have really close colors, making your whole image dull (and more because of the color you chose for your background)

Sorry I'm not very good at choosing backgrounds, as I mentioned I make most of my stuff for use in a games so I normally just work on a transparent background.  I tried to pick something that would display these better than white because they looked horrible on it.

As for the tips on my palette, I agree that my color choice needs work. I've got to head to school right now but I'll work on an edit once I get back.

I really don't know how much I can make it though, certainly not as good as those edits. Do you think I should consider using preset palettes until I learn how to make better color choices?