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Pixel Art / Re: CD thing
« on: September 28, 2006, 12:25:27 am »
well, i used your pallete for this version Takai. i think it looks better now. i took out the AAing



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Pixel Art / Re: CD thing
« on: September 27, 2006, 11:41:19 pm »
Oh, dumb me... I though it was some dude in a black beanie (will redo the edit).

EDIT: Heres two, one has a brighter white highlight, and one without.


okay, i'll update.

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Pixel Art / Re: CD thing
« on: September 27, 2006, 10:40:05 pm »
I think the original is actually better than the edit here.  I like the new spec highlight on the edited hat, but the edited CD now looks like a puffy silver donut instead of a CD.  I like the original pretty well, I'm just not sure what it's supposed to be.  Is it like wearing a hat or something?
yeah, it's supposed to be a CD with a hat. i got nicknamed CD on another forum (i have a different account name) and i always sprite my character with a hat so i just combined the two

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Pixel Art / CD thing
« on: September 27, 2006, 07:58:14 pm »
this is an older piece that i had laying around on my computer (and it's my avatar), and i wanted to improve it some, so i decided to post it here for some advice. this was also one of my first attempts at AAing, so i know it doesn't look that great. any advice would be appreciated.


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Pixel Art / Re: mah character.
« on: September 25, 2006, 11:29:46 pm »
The shirt folds look strange.
There's not enough movement to cause that much fold.
yeah, i thought it looked wierd. but i don't think i'm going to edit this guy any more

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Pixel Art / Re: mah character.
« on: September 25, 2006, 11:06:23 pm »
Is he supposed to be missing the eye? Not sure on that one...

As for the nose, not really, now his face looks blotchy.
under his hair ;) and i'll try to fix the nose
edit:

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Pixel Art / Re: mah character.
« on: September 25, 2006, 09:08:29 pm »
Yeah, a bit more contrast would help, but the highlight itself don't... how do I put it, it just doesn't say "nose".
better?


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Pixel Art / Re: mah character.
« on: September 25, 2006, 08:57:17 pm »
The small highlight line does not show the nose well, even if it is anime style. You could use a highlight instead of a shadow, but maybe try showing the top of the bridge of the nose if you want a nose in the picture. I thought you had overlooked it on purpose, so sorry for clashing with your creativity, but do like I said, ignore the nose I did, I was just giving you something to think about.
there is a higlight on there.... i should probably lighten it... but yeah, i'll try to add some more shadow to it

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Pixel Art / Re: mah character.
« on: September 25, 2006, 08:45:28 pm »


1. Fixed the black outlines, and touched up some minor details.

2. Ignore the nose, I just was testing what it would look like and it turned out good.
the nose is already there. i use a line of shading to show it.... your edit kind of ruins it..

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Pixel Art / Re: mah character.
« on: September 25, 2006, 08:02:11 pm »
i think i finished it... although i don't like how the body turned out, i don't do too well with folds. but i'm getting better at least.


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