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Pixel Art / [Feedback][WIP] Side View Sword Swing Animation
« on: October 14, 2019, 03:37:38 am »

I recently have been working on some attack animations, and I posted one here before. I got great feedback, and would really like if people critiqued this one as well:

Thank you!

Pixel Art / Re: [Feedback][WIP] Sword Swing Animation
« on: October 07, 2019, 08:15:35 pm »
How about this?

Pixel Art / [Feedback][WIP] Sword Swing Animation
« on: October 07, 2019, 07:52:09 pm »

I recently have been working on some attack animations, and would really appreciate some feedback on this one:

Thank you!

Pixel Art / Re: [Feedback][WIP] Character Run Animation
« on: September 18, 2019, 04:22:51 pm »
Wow that's great! Thank you very much! I didn't notice that the leg motions were backwards until you said it but you are right. That helped a lot.

Pixel Art / [Feedback][WIP] Character Run Animation
« on: September 16, 2019, 05:28:47 pm »
Here's a run animation I've been working on for a top-down Zelda type character:

Please give me any feedback you have! I'm very new to animation and pixel art as a whole so everything helps.

Pixel Art / Re: [Feedback][WIP] Help with Character Sprite
« on: September 14, 2019, 05:30:32 pm »

Making the head longer was a simple fix but I feel like it made a huge difference!

Pixel Art / Re: [Feedback][WIP] Help with Character Sprite
« on: September 11, 2019, 01:07:15 am »
I think the problem with the side views is the head shape. The ear is too far back, and the character's neck seems to bulge out above their torso. They also seem a bit wall-eyed, too much of their eyes is visible. The hair also seems to end halfway down the head, whereas in the back view it goes down to the neck.

The back view just looks a bit flat because the hair line is horizontal and because there isn't any shading. Try shading the lower third of the head to show its roundness, and perhaps have the head cast a bit of a shadow onto the upper torso.

Thanks so much for the feedback! I took note of your suggestions and I made a few changes.

Pixel Art / [Feedback][WIP] Help with Character Sprite
« on: September 09, 2019, 09:33:29 pm »
Hi guys!

So I have been trying to create a top-down Zelda styled character. I drew the character first as I am trying to practice going from the original design to pixel art.

What I am currently working on:

I am somewhat happy with the front view (Although please still leave any feedback for me) but am overall unhappy with the side and back views. What can I do to improve these? I am fairly new to pixel art and any feed back is much appreciated!


Orignal Drawing:

Pixel Art / Re: [Newbie] Advice for Run Cycle
« on: March 08, 2018, 07:29:52 pm »
Wow that actually looks so much better! It's crazy how such little changes can change the whole feel of the animation. Thank you guys so much for your help. I'll post here when I finish up the arms just to show the final product.

Pixel Art / Re: [Newbie] Advice for Run Cycle
« on: March 06, 2018, 08:33:06 pm »
Okay I have done a little more work on it, but somethings still seems a little off. I definitely agree that I should have done the arms along side the body and legs haha.

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