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Pixel Art / Re: [C+C] Looking for feedback on an attic scene I drew
« on: February 26, 2017, 05:36:58 pm »
one part that is bugging me a little is the angle of the bed frame that runs parallel to the floorboards...and the fact that the floorboards get considerably wider as they get closer to the "camera". Shouldn't that chosen perspective effect the bed (and carpet) more noticeably?

I am curious what others think

I'd honestly agree with you, this is one of my first real attempts at making something with pixel art so perspective is something I definitely need to work on.

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Pixel Art / Re: [C+C] Looking for feedback on an attic scene I drew
« on: February 24, 2017, 10:41:00 am »
Thank you, that makes a lot of sense now! Instead of remaking what I've drawn already I'm going to apply this to the next thing I do.

I also found this example very helpful:

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Pixel Art / Re: [C+C] Looking for feedback on an attic scene I drew
« on: February 24, 2017, 09:20:33 am »
Right now I'd say the biggest problems are your clusters and the shading on the roof. Definitely reduce the colors some, try to make the shadows a bit darker so they stand out more from the wooden beams. You've also forgotten edge lighting and made those same beams too dark, make them a proper woody color like the rest of the roof parts!

Are there any good tutorials/explanations for clusters? I'm very new to this so I'm not sure on a lot of the techniques. Thanks for your feedback, I'll work on these things.

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Pixel Art / [C+C] Looking for feedback on an attic scene I drew
« on: February 24, 2017, 08:50:32 am »
Spent around 5 hours drawing this for the pixeldaily yesterday, looking for feedback on it. :) What could I do to improve it and what could I have done differently? It's 100x100 and I didn't use a limited colour palette, though I intended to at the start.

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Just finished this, looking for opinions and advice. :) Completely new to pixel art, and fairly inexperienced in art in general.

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Pixel Art / Re: New to pixel art, looking for critique.
« on: February 17, 2017, 07:54:55 pm »
Hi!

-One thing to keep in mind about Gameboy colours is the fact that one of the colors must be the transparency. To help you get an idea of this, just change your background from green to any of the 4 tints you have chosen.
-A lot of the detail in your piece is gone at 1x scale. The hair and face are close in color that the blend together.
-The readability of it is pretty low. I can tell what you are going for, but there seems to be a lack of intentional placement of pixels in the forms. (I.E. the arm on the right)

That is just my quick thoughts.

Can see where you're coming from in all of your points, thank you for your feedback!

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Pixel Art / New to pixel art, looking for critique.
« on: February 17, 2017, 07:02:45 pm »
Hey guys, I'm looking to get some critique on one of the first pieces of pixel art that I've made. I've decided to stick to the limitations of Gameboy sprites (4 shades of grey, 32x32). I would appreciate any critique or tips that anybody can offer.



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