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Pixel Art / [WIP][C&C] Calculator RPG Sprites
« on: February 25, 2012, 03:11:04 am »
My friends and i are making a RPG for the ti-84, the whole reason why i joined this site and started pixel art ;D, and I'm wanting some criticism and help.
So looking for help i went through the trouble of copying all the sprites to the computer, Enjoy.

I'm happy with most of it except the cliff walls, and the tree sprites.
I'm trying to keep it clean looking because i played a nasty RPG on the calculator that i couldn't tell trees from the mountains.
And for the land edge sprites I'm trying to make it tile with both the water and cliff sprites which it dose for the most part.

-128, 16x16 Sprites
-3 Color Gray Scale

P.S. I think we might need BETA testers.

Pixel Art / Re: my first attempt at this.
« on: June 18, 2011, 01:11:44 am »
well... you have ... he need a neck. the proportions are off. like his legs it looks like one is attached in front of the other. he needs cloths. so u could use jeans to portray 3d. just add back or from pockets to help with the proportions. no ones arms have ever been like that unless there are viruses involved. so with a shirt add better looking hand. you dont need detail. just a circle will work for the hands. hair and a ear. u can use hair to cover the hair so u dont need to add one.

and lastly you need to study other art more. there is an entire dictionary of pieces to study. cut and paste if you half to a little from this and a little from that. just give credit from everything you take. and in no time you could be very good at this.

Pixel Art / Re: Mongol girl riding a horse [WIP]
« on: June 06, 2011, 03:10:59 pm »
the way i'm looking at the shadow it looks like it needs a little more for the head of the horse. is that just me? ???
and the horse need hoves.

Pixel Art Feature Chest / Re: [WIP] Fall
« on: June 05, 2011, 02:18:48 pm »
i can't help but to feel that her right eye is higher than it needs to be. mayby if u move it closer to her nose.

Pixel Art / Re: critique requested
« on: June 04, 2011, 01:23:45 pm »
just encase you forgot or somthing. he has somewhat long hair. in the animation it needs to bounce even the slightest. (unless hes got alot of gel or moose) it would make it fell even more real. just a small thing. playing the shot-them-up that wouldn't even matter. cause you would only give him a glance. but yeah... :-\

Pixel Art / Re: Criticize My Work :)
« on: June 04, 2011, 03:51:33 am »
i think you need more work on your lollipop. from what i can see it looks like a piece of paper on a stick.
i assume your going for a fat UFO look. if so you need to highlight were the out crop is. and shade underneath to give it a 3D spherical shape.
just a touch up is all you need, even before hand was really good. its just when i looked closer.

post a piece of art and i will edit to make it look as great as i can. and explain what i did. please no plastic brick or anything!!!!!! :lol:

I'm pikminboy111 (that it for everything so if theres a user with that its most likely me) and i'm new to pixel art but i'm fairly good.
Ill have stuff up soon enough from my current job from a friend to make the graphics for his calc game, and other stuff.

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