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Pixel Art / Some Lady ~ 3/4 portrait
« on: September 19, 2008, 03:38:07 am »
I am actually posting art, see!

I guess it's like I'm revisiting this old one...

...because oh boy it sucks.
I need some critique pretty hard. Major concerns include:
~lighting?
~colours...evidently washed out, looks much higher contrast in Gale. Will remedy.
~Anatomy, always.
I am worried about making this too shiny-mannequin looking. I think I have avoided it so far, but my palette still strikes me as sterile. Or at least dull. I'm not sure about this.
Obviously unfinished parts:
~hair
~ear
~shirt
Anyway! Criticism is of course welcome. I think people are getting very good at picking apart this subject matter, so I expect good things!
I've had enough for tonight but I will peg away at it more tomorrow.

I guess it's like I'm revisiting this old one...

...because oh boy it sucks.
I need some critique pretty hard. Major concerns include:
~lighting?
~colours...evidently washed out, looks much higher contrast in Gale. Will remedy.
~Anatomy, always.
I am worried about making this too shiny-mannequin looking. I think I have avoided it so far, but my palette still strikes me as sterile. Or at least dull. I'm not sure about this.
Obviously unfinished parts:
~hair
~ear
~shirt
Anyway! Criticism is of course welcome. I think people are getting very good at picking apart this subject matter, so I expect good things!
I've had enough for tonight but I will peg away at it more tomorrow.