Alright, so I'll be posting various pieces in here that I feel need critique.


The first thing up will be this small 24x24 explosion I'm working on for a game.

Frames:


Animated:


Granted I wouldn't call it bad by any means, I feel like it could still use a lot of work. Some of the frames feel pillowed, with the worst being the 2nd last frame (in my opinion). Even though I'm sort of aware of these problems, I'm not really sure how to go about fixing them, as I've tried a few times, only to get the same result.