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Pixel Art / Re: how about this creepy tree
« on: January 14, 2010, 01:19:53 pm »
Quote from: Jorund on January 14, 2010, 01:01:05 pm
There are a lot of things to work on.
* Palette: the last tree you posted has 20 colours (if i'm counting right). But they don't feel like that.
* Shape: the are a lot of things to work on the shape of the tree, look more references.
* Shading/Highlight: light and shadows are not just: if light comes from the right, i got shadow on the left. The give away the texture of the object and the volume. Your tree is still very flat.

Here's an edit I made:

I started making the edit before you posted again, then you had a smaller palette, but even then it wasn't very right. You had some colours that were TOO similar.

Hope it helps :)
waw....thats awesome!!i should do more and more practice to become like you and the others..
thank you for your info and critique..i learn many from this

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Pixel Art / Re: how about this creepy tree
« on: January 14, 2010, 12:41:05 pm »
Quote from: Zweckform on January 14, 2010, 10:16:34 am
Hello,

now there is improvement in your recent version. Now your tree got a visible structure.  :y:

What is missing now is shadows and light that define more on the piece. Also the colours should be adjusted to have more contrast. Does your programm have a choice to sort the palette by brightness ? Its a fast way to see if colours are too close in colour or brightness and can be left out or must be reworked.

I did a quick edit, i hope it makes things clear.


thanks to you give me the quick edit..
and i try to make edit with your quick edit as a example and this is the result

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Pixel Art / Re: how about this creepy tree
« on: January 14, 2010, 08:59:34 am »
Quote from: Elk on January 13, 2010, 04:28:45 pm
Jad I think his eyes arnt trained enough to see the highlights or notice them, his head tells him that its all skin-tone colored
yes youre right..my eyes arent trained enough.

i change like this and maybe its same..haha

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Pixel Art / Re: how about this creepy tree
« on: January 13, 2010, 04:08:30 pm »
no i dont get it..can you give me more example??
dont use finger..im very weak in shading

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Pixel Art / how about this creepy tree
« on: January 13, 2010, 02:19:46 am »
can you tell me what i don't get in my creepy tree?

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General Discussion / Re: Please tell me what the diffrent pixel art and sprite art?i dont get it..
« on: January 12, 2010, 06:51:49 am »
ohhh....so eboy is pixel art and thats not sprite art..
sprite art use for 2d games..
isnt it hard make sprite art?
i saw in youtube how to make sprite art..and i think its more hard than make some vector..am i correct?

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General Discussion / Please tell me what the diffrent pixel art and sprite art?i dont get it..
« on: January 12, 2010, 01:58:43 am »
explain me please...
i want learn more about sprite art..and how can i make sprite art??

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Pixel Art / Re: pixel vs vector(renew PNG format)
« on: January 10, 2010, 02:31:04 pm »
already change it

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Pixel Art / Re: what do you think(this is hero from WAYANG WWORLD)
« on: January 08, 2010, 08:34:39 am »
Quote from: Jad on January 05, 2010, 04:35:36 pm
It's'a pillowshaded!

Line art is nice, coloring is not. It's more or less just flood fill with some low-contrast nuances hugging the outlines - not pleasing.

I think that if you just made all the color spaces flat, completely without shading, your image would look much clearer, crisper and pleasing.

And then I think you should reshade it from there with more contrast. Try to shade with big color blocks with the same confidence that you draw solid shapes in your lineart - it's the same theory - you don't TINT the 'filling' of the lineart, you draw new clear shapes within it to show form.

Get it? I don't think I'm being clear D:

(also I really like this spriteycharacter, so don't feel hurt, I just want it to look even better <3 )
like this?



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Pixel Art / Re: Can someone give me a little touch to get this better?
« on: January 08, 2010, 08:25:17 am »
Quote from: Larwick on January 08, 2010, 05:17:42 am
Quote from: silverpurple on January 08, 2010, 04:43:10 am
waaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwww
cool!
thank you everyone...i like that all you change!

Will you be taking their thoughts and ideas into consideration and making an edit to your piece accordingly? I only ask since I have yet to see you update a piece from all the threads that you've made - it makes it seem like you're not using this forum to improve your pieces but rather to simply showcase them. I suggest you spend some time on a single piece of work, using the people here to help you as you go along - you will learn a lot in the process.
you think so?but i dont thik so..
this red color because the cassette have a transparant side

i dont have many time to make it retouch..

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