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Pixel Art / [help] alien world
« on: December 09, 2009, 11:04:32 pm »
it's a bg i'm doing for an ags adventure game.. i've been said it looks flat. Any tips? i really don't know how to fix it..
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it's a bg i'm doing for an ags adventure game.. i've been said it looks flat. Any tips? i really don't know how to fix it..
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Pixel Art / Re: heartless doll (noob first post X3)
« on: November 28, 2009, 01:13:30 pm »
mclane- thanks..! i just think it has a strong unprofessional vibe to it(not to mention all the errors that have been pointed out),that's why i feel it's kind of noobish XD
quazignrlmose-
wow, thanks for the in depth critique !
unfortunately i'm really random when it comes to composition and i'm always conditioned by what i like to show, in this case putting megaman on the right would've covered the building and part of the window, a couple of things i really wanted to work on.. but i understand the problem here, i'll try to fix it if i manage to do it without redoing the whole pic
mmm and i thought megaman was TOO contrasted! hah..you mean i should give him brighter lights and darker shadows? for the sky.. i think i kind of failed at rendering the effect of those low clouds that gets illuminated by the city below..i'll try to rework that and see if making it darker and more polished works
i wasn't sure about the rain.. i noticed that at night you only see rain when it gets near to a source of light..but giving the fact it doesn't really look like night i could just put it everywhere in the pic
for his forms..i'm not sure what anatomical problems it has, but i've always sucked at it, so i'll try to adjust it too.. though he has a bit differences from normal humans anatomy, the arms and legs are kind of detatched from his body ,i wanted to give him an "aegis from persona 3" look ( http://www.dokuganryu.com/scans/megaten/p3/07.jpg ) only more accentuated. i'll try to fix the rest of the problems with shapes too.
crazymlc- mm well it IS the inside of a roofless building ........ whoa , you know now that you make me think of it it would work way better if he was like in front of a building's windows and the city behind him was a reflection,, i'll add megaman's refletction . Thanks for the idea XD
quazignrlmose-
wow, thanks for the in depth critique !
unfortunately i'm really random when it comes to composition and i'm always conditioned by what i like to show, in this case putting megaman on the right would've covered the building and part of the window, a couple of things i really wanted to work on.. but i understand the problem here, i'll try to fix it if i manage to do it without redoing the whole pic
mmm and i thought megaman was TOO contrasted! hah..you mean i should give him brighter lights and darker shadows? for the sky.. i think i kind of failed at rendering the effect of those low clouds that gets illuminated by the city below..i'll try to rework that and see if making it darker and more polished works
i wasn't sure about the rain.. i noticed that at night you only see rain when it gets near to a source of light..but giving the fact it doesn't really look like night i could just put it everywhere in the pic
for his forms..i'm not sure what anatomical problems it has, but i've always sucked at it, so i'll try to adjust it too.. though he has a bit differences from normal humans anatomy, the arms and legs are kind of detatched from his body ,i wanted to give him an "aegis from persona 3" look ( http://www.dokuganryu.com/scans/megaten/p3/07.jpg ) only more accentuated. i'll try to fix the rest of the problems with shapes too.
crazymlc- mm well it IS the inside of a roofless building ........ whoa , you know now that you make me think of it it would work way better if he was like in front of a building's windows and the city behind him was a reflection,, i'll add megaman's refletction . Thanks for the idea XD
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Pixel Art / heartless doll (noob first post X3)
« on: November 27, 2009, 08:06:53 pm »
hhmm hi guys, first post here, i thought i should upload this thing i did recently. I'm kind of embarassed to show it considering the quality of the works that get usually posted here, but i'd like some pointers/crit/comments? i think it's not very readable and i have some issues with the palette..i don't know why but i never get to obtain those awesome color contrasts most professional pixel artists create.. so i dunno , help ?
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