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Pixel Art / Re: Help with Portrait
« on: November 07, 2011, 09:55:17 pm »
I drew up an edit for you.
Here is what I changed:
Moved the head to the right,
lined up the waist,
gave her a wider hips and chest,
shortened the arms,
 thickened her left thigh and right arm,
lowered her crotch,
and changed the flow of the fabric on her shirt/boobs to work with gravity more.



Sorry I got a little carried away with the edit, but I hope it helps!

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Pixel Art / Re: [WIP] Yeti Vs. Octopus
« on: October 05, 2011, 09:10:40 am »
Octopi hold all their guts in that sack above their eyes and brain, so it's a heavy part their body. The sac should be pulled down by gravity a lot more, especially out of water much like this little guy's:

Also on the octopus, the tentacle lines you have underneath his eyeballs shouldn't fold up like that because they don't extend that far into his face.

I like the yeti, but he's much more simple in shape and shading than the octopus, so the focus of the image goes straight to your cephalopod (doesn't help that the octopus has a bold outline where your yeti does not. ) I'd recommend simplifying the octopus; the bumpy texture of his gut sac should actually be smooth, so just giving him more solid coloring like the yeti could be a solution to the detailing issue.

'sides that I'm loving the octopus' tentacles and the yeti's bloody mouth. Maybe add some fangs and red eyes to make him look more fearsome?

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Pixel Art / Re: Apple help
« on: September 21, 2011, 09:58:22 pm »
It may not be worth adding the dotting detail to the apple because you're working on such a small scale. A single pixel is large on the small image and will probably just read as noise. You could attempt it by making them very subtle, meaning reducing the contrast of the spots.

It looks more like an orange than an apple right now-mostly because of the shape. Look at that reference Seiseki posted; you can see how the apple's widest point is just above the center and it is most narrow at the bottom. The base of your apple doesn't exist. It's not just a circle like you've depicted.

As for the texture, your first image was the closest to a smooth look, but the colors weren't blending very well. Try a similar style of shading like you did in the first with the colors of your most recent edit. If you want it to look less like an orange, maybe add more red to your colors. They're currently orange/ red-orange, but based on the reference it's actually closer to a red-magenta than orange.

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