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Pixel Art / Re: Mockup for a personal project.
« on: July 23, 2019, 12:51:51 pm »
Cute sprites. They channel that 'X of Mana' series vibe. I think it's the hair that reminds me the most.
I like the palette, but it could use a few tweaks. The biggest problem for me is contrast/values. It feels like the ceiling, floors, and walls are all demanding equal attention. It's not too bad on the walls or floors, but it strains your eyes a bit when its like that on the ceiling. I think it'd be better if those polka dots were a lighter shade of grey much closer in value to the ceiling background colour. You might even hue shift away from the grey used on the walls to visually separate it more.
I'd even try something similar on the floor. The value range is a little too close to the sprites which means the sprites don't pop/read as well as they could.
I think you misplaced your treasure chest as it looks like it intrudes by a pixel on the tiles below it.
I like the palette, but it could use a few tweaks. The biggest problem for me is contrast/values. It feels like the ceiling, floors, and walls are all demanding equal attention. It's not too bad on the walls or floors, but it strains your eyes a bit when its like that on the ceiling. I think it'd be better if those polka dots were a lighter shade of grey much closer in value to the ceiling background colour. You might even hue shift away from the grey used on the walls to visually separate it more.
I'd even try something similar on the floor. The value range is a little too close to the sprites which means the sprites don't pop/read as well as they could.
I think you misplaced your treasure chest as it looks like it intrudes by a pixel on the tiles below it.