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Pixel Art / Re: Anime Girl
« on: May 17, 2008, 11:34:56 pm »
Looks very nice, however the white part to the right of her left eye needs AA as well. Her right eye seems out of proportion compared to her left, though..

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Pixel Art / Re: Raidou
« on: May 17, 2008, 11:02:53 pm »
Shading seems a bit odd to me, as if there's a light source coming from 2 directions.



Ya shouldn't do that, because the lights contradict each other and makes it look weird.

Line art is pretty well done, good job there.

Finally, some more contrast wouldn't hurt either, try using different colors instead of different shades of a single color.

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Pixel Art / Re: A tileset..
« on: May 17, 2008, 10:42:42 pm »
Thanks, ig :)

As for your suggestions,
  • K, I did that. You're right, it looks better and is much clearer than before
  • Middle area..? You mean the plain color or the rocks on top?
  • Alright, changed that too. I made it less saturated and a little lower in lum
  • Not sure what you mean...
  • Alright, I'll start working on some

Here's what I've done so far..


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Pixel Art / Re: A tileset..
« on: May 17, 2008, 08:09:04 pm »
Hmm, I'm having a lot of trouble with background designs, details aren't my strong point, I hardly have any strong points, really. I'm still trying though.

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Pixel Art / A tileset..
« on: May 16, 2008, 10:36:27 pm »
Hello all, I thought it'd be good to get some critique on a tileset I've been working on.

-Tileset


The tree is giving me a lot of trouble.. I don't know how I should finish it. It seems like it's missing something. And I'd also like some help or some ideas at least on what to add to it. (It's supposed to be a forest tileset)


Here's a few other stuff I've worked on..

-Character


By the way, it's being used in a solo project I'm working on. If you'd like to see the progress of it, you can click here to view it. (Made in Game Maker 7)
Thanks..!

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Tileset v2 (WIP):

Character v2:

Tileset v1:

Character v1:

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