New version is too distracting. Also, the compositison feels wrong.

The letters lead out of the picture, and there's nothing to weigh against it on the other side.
Balance is important in composition.

Seconding everything Dr D said.

The flames animation doesn't look too good either, it's very laggy. Try to make it smoother.
Also you could make the lighting on his back animated, so it gets stronger when the flames are big and dimmer when the flames are small.
Maybe it would look better if he moved one pixel up/down, so it isn't completely static.

I had a look at this and thought "Fuck! This looks like shit."

So I made a new attempt.



I'll show the earlier stages so you can see where I went wrong, and because it looks a bit generic.
I want help on anatomy and making it more realistic and feminine in general.
Is her jaw too asymmetrical?
Hair will be added later, but I want to get the facial structure down first. I won't add ears though, and I know the nose is huge (gonna change that)

Also made this guy, would like some advice on him too, especially shading.



Thanks in advance.

-His legs are too short in the walking anim, compare it to the idle.
-Why is his body turning to his left with each step? Looks weird.
-It doesn't look like he's really walking, it looks more like his right foot is kicking his left foot forward, like he's dancing