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Pixel Art / Re: Present improvement
« on: January 23, 2010, 10:18:14 am »
I like where this is going.
A couple of hints on what you could work on:
* make legs taller
* improve right arm, looks like it's broken right now
* perspective seems off.. to the left from the character the train looks like it's totally seen from the side, this would mean the character is very likely to fall, however the shadows at his legs tell the train is seen in somekind of perspective which doesn't apply to the rest of the train other than the very surface he's standin on. You are implying:
(1) train is seen totally from side
(2) train is seen from top-down (Zelda perspective)
A couple of hints on what you could work on:
* make legs taller
* improve right arm, looks like it's broken right now
* perspective seems off.. to the left from the character the train looks like it's totally seen from the side, this would mean the character is very likely to fall, however the shadows at his legs tell the train is seen in somekind of perspective which doesn't apply to the rest of the train other than the very surface he's standin on. You are implying:
(1) train is seen totally from side
(2) train is seen from top-down (Zelda perspective)