Well, the lower part is pillowshaded, and the highlights on the upper part feel wrong.

I fixed these up a bit, now they almost look decent (by my -very low- standards).


From left to right: A knife, A hand doing the "horns" sign, a mini fadatar of a priest, an eye, an 8ball, Grim Fandango, A house on a hill, a nose, corpsepaint, a cleft.

Many of them have jaggies. The dragon has real potential, but you need to clean up the lines before coloring. It also needs some texture. Anyways most of it is good, but the lines need to be cleaned up.

The character looks a bit boring and unoriginal. Maybe try another hairstyle that would show some face (and save a lot of money for the character, since he won't need 5 gallons of hair gel a day ).
The thing that needs work is the chest/arms. Once they are fixed, you are a big bit on the way.

Looking good, but I think there should be a bäckahäst (river horse, näcken in horse shape), a sjörå (pretty much a female version of näcken) and a vittra (invisible forest people from another dimension). Maybe a brunnsgubbe (a troll who lives on the bottom of a well) too.