i think you eaither need to cut the straight white, or make everything brighter and more visible. Otherwise, these read pretty well and look good for sprites their size. any chance you could round off the heads? the squareness bothers me slightly. also, why make something if it's stupid? you might as well pretend its going to rock the world to the core, because if you say its going to suck then theres no chance of it being good.