I was really missing a run button and the little pauses and lack of inertia take away from the fluidity. I'd like to bounce and slide more.
I like how smooth the animation looks.
Should the pupils move from left to right however since the rest of the face does?
Yeah that is better but make more rounded shadow and the book paper end angle is too triagled.. i think its should be more rounded.. Also I made for you some kind of paper texture...forgive my bad english..Edit.
I think in one of the frames a black line appears just underneath his eyes. I'm not sure whether that is his mouth or not. At the moment it looks a bit off.
is better ?
Overall one thing stands out to me a lot: while the twisting of the pencil produces a decent perspective effect, the eyes don't seem to be included in this -- they feel a little like a cardboard cutout. It feels to me as though they should have at least two frames where they angle a little down.