Looking way better.
Her shoulders and arms are still a bit wonky though.
A few points to look at.
On her shoulders, that shadow you've drawn really makes it look like her shoulder is sloping downwards, I'd get rid of it.
Generally speaking, elbows start at the bottom of peoples rib cage, hard to find in a stylized character like this, but we can make a fairly good assumption for placement.
Upper arms and lower arms are very close to the same length. What fools people is that they fail to see the wrist and shoulders as separate structures.
I've done a few edits to show you what I mean...I'll leave it up to you to try and fix up her left arm which is reallly long.