don't forget the textured skin. should the mouth be slightly longer? the shorts look a bit flat, not because they are not shaded, but it is more to do with the contour lines flattening them. some detailing on the glove at the wrist (folds, seam, something) would look good. keep working, more c&c can then be made. the outlining on the shirt/singlet is not necessary like that i think, it makes it look undefined. looks great so far, has the making of a great piece.