No time for an edit, but I can tell you have way too many colors (55!). Most of them are very close together in value, which makes the whole thing rather blurry. You should try blocking in the forms with 3 or 4 shades of each color at most, then adding more as needed.
There's also some inconsistency with the style. The hood is harshly outlined, but the face is more realistic. I'd recommend ditching the outlines altogether. According to your reference from the other thread, you should also lighten your eyebrows a bit.