Okay. I went to bed, but woke up really early. >_<



I did an edit for you, and created a 2-frame animated gif showing the original image and the edit. That way you can zoom in and see what changes I made.

I tried to change as little of the original lineart as possible, but her mouth was way too far down. She almost didn't have a chin. I made a new palette, which ended up looking a lot like all of my standard pink and purple ones. Eh. Those colors just work really well. In the end, I dropped the 14 color original palette down to 12. In really small pieces like these, every pixel makes a huge impact on the picture. If one pixel is out of place, that can make difference between having a nostril, and not having one at all.

Oh. And remember, these forums have a built in image-zoom feature. (Click on the pictures to zoom in.) You don't need to post the images at 2x size.

There are still some spots that aren't right on mine. I hope that you can pin-point them ('cause then you'll be able to spot them in your later pieces.)

Ive been spending most of my time between pixelart done at ungodly sizes. I think Im in the middle of about three or four, and Im pretty sure Ill never finish any of them.

You and me both. The first is good. Like it lots.

The 2nd one is fantastic. Beautiful palette. The form seems pretty good so far. The clothing seems too bright in some areas, and the lightsource becomes a little lost. Don't give up on this one, as it'll make for a fantastic piece.

They play in promotion just fine.

The contents of the .rars are individual scenes from that infinite loop 120% animation (or whatever it's called).

A couple quick tips when working with a sprite of this size---

- Focus more on the illusion of depth and don't rely on outlines. In fact, I find it easier to not use ANY outlines.
- Choose colors that you can use throughout the piece. Don't just have "flesh" and "clothing" colors.

If I wasn't so busy, I'd expand on this. Sorry. That's all I have right now.